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0 | glatch_haecky_vargas_2020 | The beach was visited by my wife. | [
"My wife visited the beach."
] | I | https://writers.com/concise-writing | 1required
| 0not required
| 0not required
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1 | glatch_haecky_vargas_2020 | We are being drenched by the rain. | [
"The rain is drenching us."
] | III | https://writers.com/concise-writing | 0not required
| 0not required
| 1required
|
2 | glatch_haecky_vargas_2020 | The dog sat lazily on the couch. | [
"The dog rested on the couch. ",
" The dog relaxed on the couch. ",
" The dog lounged on the couch. ",
" The dog lazed on the couch."
] | III | https://writers.com/concise-writing | 0not required
| 0not required
| 1required
|
3 | glatch_haecky_vargas_2020 | They drove past the red fire hydrant. | [
"They drove past the fire hydrant."
] | I | https://writers.com/concise-writing | 1required
| 0not required
| 0not required
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4 | glatch_haecky_vargas_2020 | We savored the cool creamy white-and-red strawberry milkshakes, an almost sinfully delicious relief on a sweltering midsummer July day. | [
"We enjoyed strawberry milkshakes in the July heat."
] | II | https://writers.com/concise-writing | 0not required
| 1required
| 0not required
|
5 | glatch_haecky_vargas_2020 | My dragon has a tail that is very long and that stretches above my roof, and which could probably touch a passing jet if it was following a flight path which was passing low to the ground somewhere nearby us. | [
"My dragon's long tail stretches above my roof, and could probably touch a passing jet with a low flight plan."
] | VI | https://writers.com/concise-writing | 1required
| 0not required
| 1required
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6 | glatch_haecky_vargas_2020 | When he blew off our date, it only added fuel to the fire. | [
"I grew even angrier at him when he didn't show up for our date."
] | III | https://writers.com/concise-writing | 0not required
| 0not required
| 1required
|
7 | glatch_haecky_vargas_2020 | Clandestinely, Jordan lamented being the school's cynosure. | [
"Secretly, Jordan regretted being the school's center of attention."
] | V | https://writers.com/concise-writing | 0not required
| 1required
| 1required
|
8 | glatch_haecky_vargas_2020 | My passion was all-consuming, surpassing, mind-numbing, a raging bonfire that engulfed the entire universe and collapsed all of reality into a single infinitely beguiling point: him. | [
"I felt overwhelming passion for him."
] | III | https://writers.com/concise-writing | 0not required
| 0not required
| 1required
|
9 | oxford_royale_academy_2021 | In terms of Bronte's imagery, the author has some interesting observations. | [
"The author has some interesting observations about Bronte's imagery."
] | V | https://www.oxford-royale.com/articles/clumsy-phrases-avoid/ | 0not required
| 1required
| 1required
|
10 | oxford_royale_academy_2021 | It was decided by the authorities that a curfew should be imposed. | [
"The authorities decided to impose a curfew."
] | III | https://www.oxford-royale.com/articles/clumsy-phrases-avoid/ | 0not required
| 0not required
| 1required
|
11 | oxford_royale_academy_2021 | It is important to note that not all scholars agree on this. | [
"Not all scholars agree on this."
] | I | https://www.oxford-royale.com/articles/clumsy-phrases-avoid/ | 1required
| 0not required
| 0not required
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12 | oxford_royale_academy_2021 | The site was occupied by in excess of a hundred people. | [
"The site was occupied by over a hundred people."
] | II | https://www.oxford-royale.com/articles/clumsy-phrases-avoid/ | 0not required
| 1required
| 0not required
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13 | oxford_royale_academy_2021 | The character had no idea whether or not she would be making the right choice. | [
"The character had no idea whether she would be making the right choice."
] | I | https://www.oxford-royale.com/articles/clumsy-phrases-avoid/ | 1required
| 0not required
| 0not required
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