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F772343CC7A7 | Do you wounder why kindness impact on people think in your mind how kindness effect peoples lives.
The first reason is when someone show their kindness to much and they get annoyed.
The second reason is when they show kindness back they will angry at you because you got annoyed bye theirs.
The third reason is some people just don't like small people because they believe they give you bad luck.
My forth reason is an ex:Like say someone like lets say...Generic_Name gives you a hug but lets say the player decides to kill Generic_Name then Generic_Name his brother comes and shields him then Generic_Name gets his revenge bye judging you by teaching you to be nice.
My last reasons] is also a ex:Then you spare/give him respect Generic_Name is happy and goes home you can chose to kill the king or go to his house and live with him and ask him to teach you the acts of kindness.
The other ways people can show kindness is fighting their demons.
And fighting bullies from their past in their head or in the real world.
Sometimes gas stations get rob and the police have to chase them down and sometimes you can help them.
Some other ways people and kids can help they can show kindness to the ocean bye getting trash in the water.
Another why people can show kindness is helping the community pick up trash on the ground.
People across the world their are so much kind people out their they can help you with anything.
Like clean up your yard and the shed and the playground and the trampling and the outside of the house.
And they need kindness to so we help them to in needed or in trouble.
I had a old friend name umm... i forget so lets call her Generic_Name she had a lot of problems like trying to kill her self or cut her self or Evan hang her self but i was all ways there for her but on day she went missing and i never saw her again we had good times together but she was there for me to like when we were kids she wood protect me from bullies and demons i don't know how she known about demons when we were in 3 grade i did not care. Sometimes i wounder is she here watching me has a ghost i would be happy but creep out at the same time. And thats why kindness is impotent in life. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
F78366DD5A31 | The decision regarding extracurricular involvement should be left to students and their family because, students know how to mange their time, families would remind or help out, and teachers give students time to finish or study assignments.
As a senior in high school, I attend to many activities after school and still have plenty of time to complete assignments. I believe, that managing time is key on getting everything done on time. In the past, I have asked teachers on how I could mange my time and still have time to complete assignments. After having that conversation, I had improved my grades and also had time for activities. Thats why I think managing time is a good way to complete school work and finish any outside activities.
If my family were to see me go out a lot or come back late from any activity without completing my work, they would talk to me and find a way to help me out. After that, they would see my grades and check for any late assignments because, there is no family that would like for their son/daughter to have bad grades in school. Many students would not pay attention on their grades and go outside thinking that they have nothing due for any classes. Although, thats when families come in and remind their child that they have assignments to complete before they go outside. This is why families are good reminders and helpers on getting good grades.
Teachers in high school give students enough time to complete assignments or study during class. I tend to complete it during class because I like to go home and not worry about any school work. Overtime if a student does not finish their homework, teachers tend to say that they gave us time to complete it during class. However, I do not make that same mistake and finish my work during class, so that the teacher would not bother me. That is why taking advantage on finishing working during class, is a good why to have time for any outside activity.
That is why schools should not control any student, and regarding extracurricular involment shall be left to students and their families. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
F792FE4DCF1A | I disagree with this statement because anyone can change their first impressions if you just give then time and a second chance instead of just seeing them mess up.
The first reason that you can change your first impression is just by giving them another chance that they can change becuase everyone deserves a second change when people mess up their first impressions you should be able to let them change it because even you might of mess up on your first impressions on a buissines meeting or even on a date and you do want them to remember your first impression they want to remember the time you changed your first impression to a better one to show people what you are really like.
The second reason is because it can be about a really important meeting and you messed up on your first impressions and the other buissines people would be like "wow he messed up really bad on his first impressions" and you want them to give you another chance so you can fix your first impressions so they so they can be like "wow he really change from the first time he was here". So give peolpe to change their first impressions.
The last reason is that your at your girlfriends house and you are eat with her and her parents and you mess up and the dad says
"his not the type of guy you should be dating" just because you mess up now the dad does not like you anymore cause you mess up and we you go again you must change that first impressions that you showed them the first time and make it better so the dad doesn't hate anymore.
So inconluson you should give everyone a second chance to change their first impressions and make it better so they can see the person you really are. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
F79EB8CBE0FE | I agree with the Emerson's statement because when you have a mastered you work better on the something to do, with the mastered you get better opportunities,you get better position than the people no have the mastered.
Nevertheless not everybody agree this opinion, some people disagree because sometime people with not have mastered make better the job than the people with mastered.
First, when you have a mastered your work better on this sometime to do, because this people have years to study and practice. For example in restaurant wen you have a mastered on chef you only need to memorize the recipes, other people need to memorize the condiment's, the tools, and the machines is used.
Second, with the mastered you get better opportunities, because you have a title show you already prepared for the job. For example some companies need you have a mastered for the job or the position, is like a some restaurants if you want to work like manager you need a mastered and you get more money.
Third. you get better position than the people no have the mastered, because you show your experience. For example if on restaurant need people for kitchen, manager and dish washer with mastered you get the position of manager and the people with not have mastered is more probably put in dish washer and if he want to work with manager need more time and work more hard.
In conclusion people with mastered have better opportunities, work better on the something to do and get better opportunities than the people with no have mastered. For this reason I agree the Emerson's statement about if you no have a mastered you never grow. | 3.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
F7B478DB88ED | We are living in a world full of possibilities in the day to day basis, where we could decide wether to go to Paris the next day or stay at home sleeping in bed. The question is what would be a better decision in this set of crossroads. What would make the most out of our short lives we have of living. Perhaps you'll be surprised of how much yoou can accomplish in this lifespan. Being active on a day to day basis has proven to create more happiness and more "success" throughout people's lifes.
I think the many witnesses we have of people who have lived a "succesful" life is enough of an example. We have heard stories of so many different people who have stood out on their field; celebrities, journalists, corporation leaders, etecetera. What do all of these people have in common? They never backed down from their dreams and took every step in their life in action towards that dream. People like Steve Jobs could've stayed in the comfort of their homes, idle, to the outside world and the possibilities that they had to create something that would transcendentaly change the world. But they decided otherwise, because of their denial to idealness they shaped and transformed the 21st century world as we know it. All the people who we remember and our taught about in our history classes, decided to live their lifes taking action to make a change.
But many times we don't have a goal to find the motivation to take action towards our life. It should be reminded that the actions we take don't have to be for our own desires. Instead taking action and denying to be ideal allows us the possibility of one of the greatest sources of happiness: service to others. We are constantly battered by a world that seems more disastrious everyday, everytime we watch the news we seem to be living in world full of lies and grief. Where innocent people suffer the consequences of actions that are not their own. By denying to idleness and reflecting about the world we live in, we allow ourselves to create an impact on other people's lives. Spreading joy and happiness and making a mark on their lives. While also creating happiness and fulfillment in our own lives.
Perhaps a more gruesome but at the same time important way to analyze the denial to idleness is asking ourselves these questions: "When I leave this earth, what do I want to leave behind?"" What do I want my legacy to be?". Hopefully your answer isn't nothing. Because wether we believe it ourselves or not we all have the capacity, capability, and opportunity to leave a legacy that we are proud of. We are all the determinants of our legacy. Wether it be something of large scale involving the whole world or something related to your best friend. We are all most likely to want for people to remember us. Perhaps it's something chemical in our brains that makes us want this or perhaps we want to know that the time we spent on Earth was of some value. Perhaps in our last hours of living we want the reassurance of this very thing. And the only way to know that we will feel that satisfaction is by taking action today, no matter where you are or what you're doing. After all when people were asked in their last hours of living what do they regret doing, they said that they do not regret doing anything, that insted they regretted not doing the things they could've done. Taking action is the way to leave footprints on this earth, by taking steps forwards, backwards, to the right and left. And perhaps more than one of those steps will be facing the wrong direction but it's important to remind ourselves that we have to keep walking because that's the only way we will realize how much we can accomplish.
Taking action in your everyday lfe and the denial of idleness allows you the possibility to create the world you once thought you could only imagine. By stepping out and seeing what life has to offer wether that be a flower or a river, it is what allows us to accomplish our goals. And the denial of idleness helps you realize that there's people out there who want your joy put out on this world. So my last question to you is: When you wake up tomorrow, will you take a step forward? | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
F7B5DF87EA1D | If we didn't take a action, What should we do?
Thomas Jefferson wrote, "Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something. Accomplish more can give your dreams and goals in your life.
We Accomplish more if we are always doing something because Many people supported us, Take a risk and do action and Be yourself.
People might say Inactivity also serve a purpose because god has a plan for us.
Others might say inactivity also serve a purpose becuase dream takes time.
Still others might say inactivity also serve a purpose bacause they say you need to think first before do the action.
There's some reason to help you to accomplish more.
1. Many People supported us. Why? They want you to be successful because they want you to live a better life and to not experience the poverty in life. They know that you have a dreams becuase they love you and they know you as a person.
2. Take a risk and do action. Why? You want to achieve something in your life because achieve something is to know yourself more and you want to prove in yourself that you can achieve something and you need a experience so you can handle all that risk that you take it before and to do your best next time.
3. Be Yourself. Why? because you have a dreams in your life. You see yourself that you achieved your dreams someday and we know that people has a dream that want to achieved someday. You know to yourself that you can do all becuase you enrourage yourself and your family that "you can do this" and you already accomplished a lot.
We Accomplish more if you know to yourself that you can do something because people in your side supported you, You enrourage yourself that you can do all and even there is a lot of risk, still fight for your dreams.
If we didn't take a action, so you can't accomplish or achieve something in your life. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F7B655834981 | she is not to bring a phones in school because it is the school and you do not a phones to you get in t and get at school you cult get call home and you get a big and you cum to for a mouth ,you we be other lunch .or you do not cum you we be achubll and i wuld call your mom to tell you to cum . and stop testing went you are tollking and you are going to get a teket stop testing well be stop you well be in a cold and you well be stop. you would stop .would be stop and you. do not have allo w students to have phoneat school at all. | 1 | 1.5 | 1.5 | 1.5 | 2 | 2 |
F7CBE1D11BF8 | Is true self-esteem caused by self-confidence or is it caused by achievement, are people right about what they believe that; self-esteem is caused by self-confidence or is self-esteem caused by achievements? Self-esteem is caused by achievements, although some people may believe self-esteem is caused by "self-confidence". I personally believe, self-esteem is caused by someone's achievement. By personal experience my self-esteem is caused by my own achievements.
True self-esteem is caused by achievements for example: We can say, an employee at Chipotle has recently been elected "employee of the month". People may say " what does that have to do with self-esteem?" It does have to do with self-esteem because, that person has recently been elected employee of the month, and is being rewarded for his achievement of being elected employee of the month for his hard work. Although some people may believe that; self-esteem is caused by self-confidence. I personally still believe achievement is prior to self-confidence, and it's the cause of someone's self-esteem like; being elected employee of the month, that is one feeling of satisfaction that person had for being elected employee of the month.
Next, it is possible that self-esteem could be caused by self-confidence. For example: there may be students that can't start off their day learning without feeling confident about themselves. They may not want to learn, because they don't feel the positive energy or enough knowledge to be able to cope with how they're feeling that day; whether they want to learn or they don't want to learn. Also, for example: I have a friend who can't learn if she doesn't feel confident. She starts distracting others around her, she starts interrupting class, because it is hard for her to focus and learn when she doesn't feel confident. Although some people believe in praising a student's work to build self-esteem. I still believe in achievement being prior to self-confidence. Because in my opinion the second the student is done being praised; they will immediately go back to not feeling self-confident to start their day learning.
Finally, true self-esteem is profit to achievement. There is a vast of people around the world being praised for their achievements. Achievements include; If you're being praised for something good you've done like: getting a job, becoming employee of the month, helping someone by carrying their groceries to their car, if an elderly has tipped over in the street and need help getting up, these are the causes of true self-esteem. For example: Last year 2018 at my old school, Generic_school our cheer team felt true self-esteem to find out they had made it to finals. Making it to cheer-leading finals was a vast achievement for them, because it had been 5 years since our team had won finals.
In conclusion, true self-esteem is caused by achievement. By personal experience I can conclude that achievement plays a huge role in having self esteem, because my true self-esteem is caused by my own achievements, and due to others personal experience true self-esteem is caused by their achievement. Although some people may believe that; self-esteem is caused by "self-confidence". I personally believe, self-esteem is caused by someone's achievement. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
F7CC31D47F06 | Imagine having a secret talent. Talking or singing with my mouth close is a talent, because it makes people happy and it also helps me feel less nervous.
It makes people feel happy because, one day kids were playing outside I decided to tell them funny jokes with my mouth close. The kids felt happy and were wondering how to talk without moving your mouth. Sometimes I tell my friends that I like their smile with my mouth close. It makes them smile more because they know its me. Having a talent can make people happy and you can also make their day.
It also helps me feel less nervous and helps me talk to people alot with my mouth close. One example is that when I sing I get really nervous so just sing with my mouth close and nobody looks at me because I am not moving my mouth. Singing with my mouth close makes me feel confident. When I am walking and people are asking for dirrections I get to do it with my mouth close. Talking with my mouth close helps me a lot when I dont want to talk or when I am having a bad really bad day. Sometimes is hard to communicate and it is hard not to be nervous so talking and singing with my mouth helps me a lot.
Eveyone has a talent. Singing with your mouth close or talking is a talent because it makes you feel happy and sometimes it helps when you are nervous. You can make people happy when you have a talent. It also helps you to be more confident with yourself. You also get to share with the world what you are able to do. I think that sometimes when you have a talent can help people and can make everyone else happy. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F7CF6202A7FA | In the past, I think I studied really bad and I didn't get a high school diploma. I think I agreed with Emerson's statement because I need to try harder and get a high school diploma, although some people might say I disagree with Emerson's statement.
I agree with Emerson's statement because I need to study harder. To begin with, I need to pass this class to get good grades. Additionally, I have to spend time for studying and get ready for another test. I will not get frustrated and confused for this test. Next, we studied together with my friends so that helps me boosting my grades. My friends would help me and studied together so gives me to memorize my brain and getting ready for the test. Finally, I will try my best and think harder so I can track my grades and make it smarter. Furthermore, I will able to check my missing work so I can get back for my passing grades. That said, I would agree with Emerson's statement.
I agree with Emerson's statement because I'm getting a high school diploma. First, I have to check my grades to get an high school diploma. I will able to see my passing grades to get my diploma. Second, I will have to take job classing during the graduating year. I would choose to computer science so I have to get mastered of computing. Also, computer science is really hard, so I have to practice for computing coding daily so I can get back on track to getting good grades. When I'm college, I have to get the computing degree is the key to success for good grades. Lastly, I will practice computer coding everyday to get beyond programming and future. But I will take computer knowledge classes and technology to help maintenance computers and resolve computers to fix. It is obvious people would agree with Emerson's statement.
Still, some people might say they disagree with Emerson's statement. For instance, they are struggled to keep things up, however, the grades are getting down. I'm feel depressed when I don't know about combing computer codes. Also, I can't even focusing on work so I tried to get help with others. Sometimes, I would provide an assistance when I'm doing my work. My friends would teach me for how I do computer coding to get some provide information. As I said, they agree with Emerson's statement.
That was being said, I have to try harder and get high school diploma, I would agree with Emerson's statement. In the future, I will apply a job for a programmer to get career information. I have to code, work hard and get some activities to do. I will train hard and get involved with my career. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
F7DB1032DFAC | Did you know everyone has a talent? Talent is a special skill that everyone has. Everybody has a talents or a skill, my talents is doing math problems, when you do math you will be more organized and it helps you grade go up even more better.
First, if you solve math problems more often, you will be good at organizing things. Solving math can make you think about spending time. It will create a thought about how you spend time. Eventually, you will learn how to spend your precious time wisely. Additionally, it will lead you to good decisions. Basically solving problems is like, when you have to make a wise decision. You have to figure out the best solution that you can think of. After that, this process can help your personal problems. We use math everyday to solve our personal problems. Math is not just a subject, it is teaching you life skills too. Solving math problems can lead to good organizing skill.
Next, If you do math, it can help your grades go up and get it more better. First of all, if you start doing math, your grade for math will be satisfied. Math subject requires a your time for studying and it takes your patients too. Taking the time to study for math always pays off. In the end, your grade will be good and it will be all worth it. Then, when your grade is good, you will be more relaxed and pleased with your life. When you have a bad grade, it really does feel awful and the you will be ashamed by yourself. But when you have a good grades, it just makes you feel better and good. Eventually, If do math more than usual, start doing it for your free time, you will be good at other school subjects. Every subject has little bit of math. For example, science is basically a different form of math. For me, figuring out math problems helps your grades get better.
Solving math equations is my talent, when you do math, I think you get more organized and your grades go up. For me doing math is like a puzzle, if get wrong piece you will have to try again and if did put in the right place you will get the solution. If you made mistake, you have to think again, learn from it and try hard to not make the same mistake again. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
F7DC6C783239 | Bad choices, no better career. Ever thought about how a bad path looks like? A bad path will never lead you into good things. It will just mess up your school grades. Think about the good choices and how it will bring joy into your life.
First, my cousin was going through a bad path last year when he was a freshman in high school. He would always come home late at night. He always had his mother worried about him. Next, there was this one night where she was so worried, she had to call the police because she thought something bad happened to him. When my mom told me about the situation, I never looked up to it, never imagined myself doing that. In addition, he would barely answer his mothers phone calls. She was devastated seeing her son go through a bad path. One day she was done with the things he did, so she decided to take him to Generic_City with my 37 year old cousin. He spent about 2 weeks in Generic_City so that he would think about his bad choices. When he came back, his mother decided to move to another house and another school for him. Finally, things are so much better now. His grades are much better now, he doesn't go out to late at night anymore, and his mom is peacefully working.
My cousin is doing good choices now. First, he is not in bad paths anymore thanks to his mother. Recently, he has been working out and eating healthy. Every Saturdays and Sundays morning, he goes to the gym with this older sister that is 21 years old. Next, he gets home he eats a bowl of sugar free oatmeal with sliced strawberries and blueberries. I know for sure that he wants to be a new and better person. Last year when he was a freshman, he would skip a lot of school days. His mother would get phone calls of him absent. But, he is putting a lot of effort into school. Over the summer, my dad decided to take him to work with him. My cousin helped him out with construction tools. They both worked for about 7 hours that day. A few days later, my dad had to meet up with his boss and other co-workers to earn the money. Lastly, my dad, siblings and I drove to his house to not only drop off the 80 dollars he earned, but also see how him and his family were doing.
I never experienced this, and I know that I never will. Seeing the suffer in his mom was terrifying. I would never want my mother to suffer the way his mother did. Think about the good choices and how it will bring joy into your life. I would be very lost to see myself into his bad choices. It's very important to learn experience from others to use empathy and see how it will affect you. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
F7DD6134C693 | Generation by generation there is a new technology, out time we have cell phones, computer, tablet. People use cell phone in positive way and some times in negative way as comunication, news or to study, some school allow students use it in classroom for education purposes and some school they not allowing it for so many reason.
Schools should allow students to use there smart phone in classroom for many education purposes as recourding a labs or math or for communication betwwen students in group project.
Having a cell phone in classroom make teacher now who is apsent and who's not with some new technology application and we cell phone they can done there work easyer.
By not allowing students use there cell phone they will lose time that they not having it, and make things difficult and students they will make a lot of nuse bye talking to each other in some group project.
Students want his class to be easyer and he want to enjoy it and learn every day from it and by make easyer by using cell phone every one going to be happy. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
F7DE5680F74D | Is important to learn about the expiriense of others because is possible that the same happen to you but when that happen you will be prepare and you will not be scare of what will happen to you or others thats why when you have someone that expiries the same problem that you have is the right thing to ask what happen and how she or he solve the problem and if is possible to call for help.
Other thing that you can do is when your see your granma talk about the problem she have and what was the solution she took for that problem and why because when you expiriens the same problem you now what you can't do or see do options you have but is important that you ask before appends to you or someone else that you now is important to you.
You can't do so much if you ask before it appens to you or your family because if happen you now how to confront the problem for your self or whit the people u carres for you and loves you that are some options you can't do to comfront the type of problem you expiriens.
You can't help others if you don't stay in silence and ask if you can't help or do something for the person u is expiriens some problems and what type of problem because some problems cut always be dead.
Some poeple don't have families you now why is because they don't leat people help whit the problems they have thats when the people try to soved for is self but in some cases you have to need help you can't leave whit out help is something that you have to undrestant you need sometimes help because if you are in real trable you will be dead. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
F7DF6ABE8573 | I strongly believe that technology is positive on human life because of all the effects it had on us in the past and present. Such as: technological advancements, you can talk to people easier, caused scientific break throughs which made us go further in life, and it also gave us security or protection.
The technological advancements are practically everywhere because everything we use is technology. It has helped us with new vehicles that could possibly be more fuel efficient and possible will create more safety in the cars since it's easy to hurt someone in a crash. It helped us in school and made us understand things such as looking up answers you dont know or checking when the next test is. It inspires people to think of other ways we can advance our technology state currently.
Its really easy to talk to people because it doesnt take that much effort in order to have a conversation. The news is one example because it tells us whats happening even if they are far away from us, we can still hear them. The weather could change into a disaster and they would tell us to evacuate. It allows us to talk to relatives that live in other areas or countries. It could let us see political debates and see whats happening in other areas.
Without technology we wouldn't have had any scientific break throughs because it moslty helped us with everything in life. An example of this would be us landing on the moon which is a important day for the people because it showed that we could do really big things. If people did not take the time to study and think about the different scenarios then we would not have those outcomes. It helps us by looking up something we dont understand on the internet and in five seconds you could finally understand whatever you were trying to look up.
One thing that makes us feel safe would be your own home but what if someone broke in and had bad intentions. There would be an alarm system that would ring and call the police to indicate that there was a intruder. It gives us security by giving us locks on important things such as banks so no one can enter it unless they knew your password or any other necessity.
Technology definitely played a huge role in our daily life and the evidence shows because everything we do involves technology or is something about technology. I strongly believe that technology doesn't stop human interaction but helps builds it up. I think this because we can text friends, text family, work on a project, or do school related stuff with it. If we keep on making up better technology or improve it then I believe it will make discover or invent big things that will push us into the future. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
F7E091B1D163 | Do curfews keep teenagers out of trouble?
In this essay I will discuss as to why curfews could be a necessary law for teenagers.
One of the reasons curfews could help out parents keep their children safe is that teenagers like to hangout with friends late at night and having a curfew for teenagers could prevent them from getting in some sort of trouble.
Another reason why curfews could keep teenagers more safe is teenagers think they know everything in this world but in reality they don't know how the world really is and anything can happen at any certain time.
The finale reason why I think some teenagers need to have curfews is because some teenagers are still not mature enough to be out late at night and something could possibly happen to them. I think the 3 reasons listed above is more than enough evidence to have curfews for teenagers to keep them safe and to keep parents aware and calm for their children. As a parent or guardian of a teenager we all want to keep our children as safe as possible because anything could happen outside our homes.
In concussion I think the 3 reasons listed above is more than enough evidence to have curfews for teenagers to keep them safe and to keep parents aware and calm for their children. As a parent or guardian of a teenager we all want to keep our children as safe as possible because anything could happen outside our homes. Curfews can be good thing to keep parents aware of what their children are doing but I personally think they should not be a law for every teenager. For example some parents they are OK with letting their child to be out late at night but as long as they stay in contact with a parent at all times. That shows that not every teenager in this world is irresponsible and is aware for their own actions. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
F7E78C064324 | When people ask for advice they most talk about how to do play sport or do they do they homework . Or they talk about people will explain how to do you homework like a teacher she/he can teach you how do to the work.
What people as for advice like what If that person was new to the school and ask a lot of people you should help him.,
You can explain how can help lot of people who is new to the school, Someone can explain how to better at sport and can tech you how to get better. Someone can explain lot of tings of talk about that class or he/she can stay after school for a better grade or to fix a test that he/ she do bad at the test.
Like if you want to buy your dream car but they have explain what to do in car like how to drive the car but every ting need to be explain. Hook is buy your dream car the guy who explain other for hes dream car what to do for his car and they explain how to do all of this staff to do bufore buy his dream car. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
F7FD0CB34BBC | Everyone has a talent or skill. For Example, my talent is drawing. Drawing is really useful because I can use it for a lot of things like school projects,plays,and more. To get good at something I enjoy doing it takes a lot of time and effort for me to be good at the activity i enjoy doing. Every one has a talent or skill but the only way to develop that talent or skill is by hard work,practicing,and doing it constantly.
Firstly,everyone has a talent or skill but the only way to develop that skill is by working hard. For example,when I first started drawing. when I first started to draw i was really bad,cause i didnt practice at all. However,when I started to put that hard work in I started to get good at drawing and then i saw that I can only get better by working hard. Moreover,working hard is a chance for me to show my self what im capable of doing. Working hard is good for me because im challenging my self to do better in life as I get older and get better in my skills and talents. As can be seen,just by working hard can take someone far in life to achieve greatness.
Secondly,everyone has a talent or skill but the only way to develop that talent or skill is by practicing it. For example, my friends talent is playing soccer. My friend is really good at soccer because he practices and trains everyday. Even though my friend is small and skinny he doesnt care who he plays against because he can play with people twice his size and double his weight and still play good. For example,one day I went to see my friend play in a tournament. The day of the tournament was beautiful because the sun was out,the sky was blue, and the temperature was perfect. After a few minutes of us waiting, the game finally started and we got to see my friend play. At the beginning of the match my friend was going through everyone because of how he was playing. My friend was running so fast that he looked like a cheetah running for the ball. After the match was over they ended up winning the whole tournament because they had the most points which made my friend really happy cause all that hard work had finally paid off. Later we went to eat at a restaurant which smelled like flowers and the food tasted like if it was from heaven. As can be seen,practicing can take people to achieve greatness.
Lastly,everyone has a talent or skill but the only way to develop that talent or skill is by constantly doing it. For example,when my dad started to learn how to play the guitar. At first my dad was really bad because he had never played a guitar in his whole life,so he told his friend to teach him hot to play it. My dads friend told him everything he needed to know on how to play it,so my dad started playing the same notes constantly until he learn how to play it. Further more,having a talent is awesome because it can help people with daily day challenges. For example,if im playing a soccer match and my talent is playing soccer im going to do good,or if im in school and i have to do a project and my talent is drawing im going to get a good score because thats where im good at. As can be seen,practicing constantly can improve someones talents or skills.
In conclusion,everyone has a talent or skill they just need to know how to develop that talent or skill. By practicing,working hard,and constantly doing it can be improve a persons talent or skill. Do you think its helpful to have a talent or skill? | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F82EFD88E2BE | Success has always it's ups and downs, I know that their will always will be failures in whatever you are doing. For example, I am planning to be a photographer soon, with that
I had to go through many steps in getting the equipment that I needed. Also I needed to figure out all of the techniques of a camera, through all of that their has always been times where I failed to complete my task. Either their were problems with my camera or with my lighting just problems that I didn't know how to function well enough. Well with all of that I learned from my mistakes now, I know of what and not to do with my camera. I'm still learning new techniques since I started about a year ago, I'm still somewhat new but I plan to do this for a couple years and make a career out of it
When we try to pursue a career or even just trying to figure out the simplest problem that we have, we will all at one point in our lives get a answer to that problem or issues that you have. That's why failure is a key part to success, if you don't learn from your mistakes how will you learn. For example, when I was in middle school my teacher always picked on me in class the reason behind it was because I didn't play my instrument the right way. Well now I thank him for teaching me and instructing me how to play my instrument the correct way. Now I have improved over the past years and play the saxophone in my senior year.
In Conclusion, their will always be ups and downs in life, in all of these examples that I have given you they have all impacted my life in a good way. It also shows that in my life their was failures and at some point in your life their will be problems that you have got to fix. In my hands I will have a advantage over people that starting to be a photographer, they will make the same mistakes as I made but they will recover from it. That's why success has always been my number one goal in life I want to be a well known photographer. All of these examples have made me a better person from what I was and from what I am know and I am thankful for all of the adults that had helped me through this journey. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
F834F75D0E3C | The school board plans to add one and a haft hours to each school day. Do you think is a good ideas to extending the school day? The school board should not add one and a half hours to each school day because all the students will got stress,all the school program will get delay, and the all starts to skipping school.
The first reason why the school board should not add one and a half hours to each school day is because all the students will got stress. Some students can get depression by learning to much. They don't want to study anymore because of the long day in school. They will get very tired of sitting all day. They will not do their homework because they have to memorize a lot of thing at school are ready. They don't have a lot of time left at home to study or do in their homework. They will not interesting in school anymore. That's the first reason why the school board should not one and a half hours for each school day.
The seconds reason why the school board should not extending the school day is because of the school program and activity will got delay. So if the school board add one and a half hours of school all the after school program will get delay. No more students want to stay after anymore because if to late. Just think about the transportation from the school. If a student live in a rural area they have to wake up at 5 A.M to get ready for school because from his/her house is one hours away for the school. If the student planning to stay after school she/he may not get home at 7 P.M. And he/she have to get home before 7 P.M to be available to do her/his homework. That is all the reasons why school should not extending the school day.
The cost of electricity every year is over 6 millions dollars, just think about how much it can cost the school board if they add one and a half hours of school each day? If the school board add one and a half hours for each school day, all the students can learn more thing. The last reasons why the school should not add one and a half hours because the cost of electricity. Every years the school board have to pay over 6 millions dollars. If the school board spend over 6 millions to the electricity every years then how many millions for every thing else. The school board will not have a lot of money let to updates the school.
The school board should not add one and a half hours to each school day because all the students will got stress,
the school program and activity will got delay, and the cost of electricity. That is all the reason why the school board should not add one and a half hours for each school day. Are you agree or disagree with extending the school day? | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
F83702EEB830 | I agree with it because everyone has to do something productive in school and playing a sport is good for our health, yearbook writing is good for our spelling, and serving in a student council makes you be more confident and talk more with other people.
Playing a sport is the best way to make our bodies stronger and healthy, it also helps us mentally when you are going through times going outside and playing helps you a lot. Playing a sport in school helps you have more energy and be ready to learn it likes opens your mind. Soccer for example is helps your body be stronger, Volleyball helps your hands be more stronger, Basketball helps you jump higher, and Football helps you run faster.
Writing or coloring the yearbook is a great idea too, because you are writing something that everyone is going to see so i know you gonna write neat and correctly. Coloring is good for our brains too it helps us be calm and out of stress. Spelling is one of the most important things and writing helps it improved it, coloring is something that not everyone knows how to do it, but by practicing we are gonna learn.
Serving in a student council helps you a lot because you learn something very important and thats learning how to communicate with other people and be nice. Sometimes its hard to communicate or talk to other people but we have to do it because sometimes the people needs someone to talk to and someone to be there for them. Helping to helping is a best thing you can do maybe you are not getting something from it but at least your being a helper.
In conclusion I think that everyone has to do something is school it doesnt matter what but we have to. School is not just for learning and being bored in class, school is for you to be happy and confortle with everything, we can make school fun. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
F84E5DEFC874 | Have you ever just sat down and thought, Do we really accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose? Some say sayings have a reason for example Thomas Jefferson wrote "Determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something", Does this mean it is true because he said it? Or is it just something he wrote because it was his opinion?
I strongly agree with what Thomas Jefferson wrote, it's saying in little words don't be lazy, it's amazing how much can get done if we are always doing something. If we are always doing something other than what we want to accomplish it takes time and the process just gets longer. I believe that inactivity serves a purpose even though your inactive or active some or many things can be accomplished.
One reason I believe that inactivity serves a purpose is because, more can be accomplished when you are not active and working. I have experienced this numerous of times at my job. At my job,
we have task we have to get done by a certain time which is closing and sometimes those task don't get done due to how busy the store gets, when the store gets busy we can't get what we want accomplished, but say we are not active, or working and the place gets slow and calm. We have the time to get our task done and meet the requirements and leaving on time. When you are super active and busy it get hectic and that just adds more to your tasks. For example your making some food, drinks and theres more and more orders, you can't make something then clean your gonna have to keep going and clean it all up at the end when it slows down. In my opinion you get what you want accomplished when your less active in this case.
Another reason I believe that inactivity serves a purpose is because, when your not active you don't know what your gonna accomplish that day, but out of boredom your gonna get something out of it. This happens to me all the time where one day i'm just free all day with absolutely nothing to do, and i just lay in bed with a mess in my room not even thinking about the mess and all of a sudden I start cleaning everything and organizing everything. Like Thomas Jefferson says "Determine never to be lazy... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something" In this case it works both ways because if your doing something you get something accomplished and something good out of it, but if your doing absolutely nothing then you get nothing accomplished.
Lastly I believe that inactivity serves a purpose because, say your going to try out for the boys or girls soccer team and there is only 1 spot left. Obviously your going to need to practice everyday and know how to play. Practice makes perfect the more active you are with soccer, the more chances your gonna get that last spot to be a member of the soccer team, but say you really want the last spot but your just not as good as the others and it's a new sport you just wanna try out but you are not practicing everyday to get better. If you don't practice everyday to get better then there are less chances of you making that last spot just because you weren't as active and on it like the others. The more practice you receive the more chances you will have to get that last spot because of the dedication with no activity done theres no hope in that.
In conclusion, inactive or active you get through your day and learn something new and that is a accomplishment so much can be done in many different situations, anything is possible. At one point through your day you accomplish making it through even if you felt like you didn't accomplish anything you must have, because you learn something new that is the biggest accomplishment. Thomas Jefferson said that for a reason for sure. Everything has a meaning and reason behind it. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 |
F85B1C875E6C | The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a negative effect on peoples lives because there is less communication, you dont really get to enjoy life as much, and your less capable of showing your creativity or smartness. Technology has had a big effect on humans from adults to toddlers all around the world in schools and in many other environments. With less communication due to technology may cause conflicts between people. You may have not been able to comprehend what was said or happened because you werent communicating. Not communicating causes people not to understand what you mean or where you are coming from in any situation if its in a relationship or friendship. Communication is something everyone should be comfortable to do and know about.
You dont really get to enjoy life as much because with technology you dont really focus on anything else that is happening around you. When your at family events you may be on your phone and not focusing on your family enjoying dinner, making funny jokes or opening up about something new and important to them. You may be at school and miss on all school events or the kindness of people around you. It does have a big impact on your family because you may care and love them but having technology around really makes them think otherwise.
Technology may get in the way of you showing your creativity and smartness. When you are at work or at school and you have been put in a place that you have to prove what you are capable of. A teacher may have assigned you to activities or have you do homework but you may have not done it or been able to. You arent capable of outsmarting someone or something through technology and creating new things or being open minded to learn new things. Everything may be different due to you being used to technology. The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a negative effect on peoples lives because there is less communication, you dont really get to enjoy life as much, and your less capable of showing your creativity or smartness. Many are used to it and carry it everywhere with them and it may be a distraction in certain places or situations. You complete much more tasks without technology in schools, with families, and jobs. Technology may not be able to teach or help with things you will need in real life situations without it you avoid many problems. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
F869B38F3A89 | We never to be Idle. If we try to change the bad things that we have we can be better. If I do not try speak less in class I never going to change. My friends need to left proceed like anormal people. If my sister do not try to change your bad mood she never will be a better person.
Every body need to know that the Word ''Idle'' is something bad, because sometimes is annoying. Some people are Idles and that is no good. When we are idles others people sees us like anormal people. If I disturb a lot in class I can look like a anormal person.
Many people in the world are Idle, someones in work, school or shopnig. when I go out with my friends sometimes I do not feel conform. They performance as anormal people. When a boy want to girlfirend he can be idle. The younger people can be more Idles.
I know a person, him is so idle. Once when we were working him was start to talk about something hugly. Boss told him, you need shut up. My sister is idle when she wants something. Many people proceed Idles when they want something.
We can be better if we try to improve many things. If I try to make better my conduct I can be a nice person. If My friends trying to left of bother in all places they can be different. A person improve everyday more for be a better person. Is for these and many others reason that people should to know that everybody can improve if they want. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
F86C79CE78F4 | The people can't speak and had contact with other peolpe but, not undestand to other people; Someone people are invisible for other people because they speak little, although is better comunication to each person.
The technology can't elimination to the human, Because the human are creating for God and God is creator of the human for which reason, the technology not change, the humans have the ability for take the technology more specific and creative.
I thing than, the technology is positive for the human, Because for everyone people help and take that the people have more creativite, and more inteligent.
To the people not effect the technology;
The people can check book, shop in your cellphone without needed speak with other person, for the person is very good because to go by car to the shop.
I think than everything for progress is positive in the community for the human, Because everyone learn more things with the technology, Although there much deliquency among more cience exist in the world. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 |
F86CA3BFAB20 | I take "Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." Because the more you do the more you get done. And that will make your life so much easier. You should should never wait for tomorrow to do something if you can do it today. Also, you can't be idle for the rest of your life. You can't be successful if you're just going to idle. To be soemthing in life you have to work hard for it. You always have to push yourself to the max limit. But at the end it'll all be worth it.
I remember my mom always used to tell me that "Never wait for tomorrow to do something that you can do today." And that will be in my head for the rest of my life. I use that quote to motivate myself when I'm doing homework or going to the gym etc. It always works and i will always live to that. My whole family lives to that qutoe.
The world would be such a better place if people didn't idle. If people were determined to work hard for themselves, everybody in the world would be succesful. Also more people would be enjoying a more wealthy life. Less people wouldn't need a place to sleep. Their would be more people enventing stuff to make the world a better place. Everybody in the world would have water and food.
You would make your whole family proud. Give back to the people. Do unreal things that no human has ever done before. Maybe even go to every planet to see if humans are able to live there. Their would be less crimes and less lives lost. Also more opportunities for people to succeed.
Finally, Thomas Jefferson wrote that quote for a reason. For people to succeed in life. It was for people to look at the quote and actually do it and not idle. Thomas Jefferson wanted people to do great things. He wanted people to always be doing and not idle. If you're determined you will succeed. Never give up. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
F87594F095B6 | The creation of a after school homework club will be a horrible idea because of students not going to it, the homework will not be challenging, and making lazy students more lazier.
In my opinion, if the school created a after school homework club, nobody will come. Students can be lazy and do not want to do their homework. There are many other ways to help students improve in their behavior and achievement.
Homework is just a way to reinforce the main study. If the Principal decides to establish this "Club," it will make the homework easier. Homework is to reinforce the main idea of studies, if they make it easier, then what will be the point of homework.
A homework club will be a disaster; the students will be lazier than before! not to mention that the school will not use any more homework for it has become useless to reinforce subjects.
In conclusion, Establishing a after school homework club will be a disaster, with homework not being able to reinforce the students with subjects, making the students lazier, and the idea that no one will go there. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F8776FDF7DC0 | Have you ever thought about what to bring on a trip to the park? I've, it's frustrating to pack an activity that everyone is going to like. There are multiple ways to have fun at parks for example, you can play soccer, explore the park, and play football with your friends and family.
First of all, when you're at a park you most likely want to have a good time with your family and friends. Soccer is a good way to relax. You may ask " Why is soccer a good activity to relax?" well, when you're playing soccer you can get your mind off things. It helps you think more on the game then what else is going on out side of the field. Also soccer is a good way to communicate with one another.
Second of all, you can play a game of football. Football is also a good way to communicate with one another. For example, in football if we want to win we have to have a good game plan. So, we have to gather our opinion and thoughts to make the right plan. Football is a good way to bring everyone together to communicate.
Third of all,
you don't always have to play a sport to have fun. You can go explore around the park. For example, you can go walk around, look at the beautiful trees and flowers, and go hiking. While you are also there you can take beautiful pictures!
To sum up, there are multiple activities you can do at the park. Think about other activities that you can do with your family and friends. There are many more than those three for sure. You also have to think about others too and what they want to do. Therefore, there are many other enjoyable activities out there. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
F886A2B6F351 | It's a good idea to have homework club at your school. Every school should have homework club at least three times a week. Homework club is a club where teachers help you with your homework or if you need help understanding a subject. Homework club helps students get to learn a little bit more about that subject, be more active with theirs friends, and it makes them have more confidence about their work. Homework club is a big help for students. There's so many stuff you can do at homework club and that is finishing a project with a friend, studying for a test/quiz, or even finishing your homework early.
At homework club you get so much help from the teachers. You can finish a project with a friend and when you do that it helps you be more active with that person. If a student ever has a doubt with a question about their project, then they can go to homework club and get some help with their project. The best part about homework club is that when more students come, we get to help each other with our projects. It's like a community were we help each other with any questions we have. Projects are really hard when you do it by yourself, but if you go to homework at your school then you will get all the help you need. If your having trouble then the best place to go is homework, so you can get some help.
Another thing you can get do at homework club is study for a test/quiz. The teachers will help you make flashcards, help you over the study guide, or even play a game of kahoot. If you didn't know what kahoot is, kahoot is a game where it helps you a lot before a test/quiz. I can say that kahoot is like a study guide but form into a game. Many students can't really study for a test/quiz when they are at home, because they can't concentrate studying when they are alone. So if you go to homework club they will help you study for your test/quiz and you will for sure not get distracted. I recommend everyone to come to homework club at least three times a week so you can get help studying for a test/quiz or if you need help with something else. If you go to homework club then you will pass your test/quiz, cause homework clubs will help you prepare yourself for your test/quiz
The last thing that homework clubs helps you is get your homework done early. the teachers will explain everything perfectly and I guarantee you will learn even more then what you learn in class. Math teachers, Science teachers, History teachers, and English teachers are going to teach students so much more. You can go to homework club and do your homework early so you don't have to worry about doing it at home. In homework club teachers explain the homework to the students but with more details. What I mean is that the teachers will teach you more about that subject.
Homework club is one of the best club their is. It helps students learn more about the subject, it also makes them have more confidence, and it makes them be more active with your classmate at homework club. Homework club is a community full of amazing students and teachers. There's so many things teachers at homework club help you with and that is Helping you get your projects done in time, helping you study for a test/quiz, and helping you finish your homework early. We can achieve this goal of establishing homework clubs in schools, but we need help from student to make this goal happen. Homework club would be boring and not helpful if we didn't have some amazing teachers at school volunteering for homework club. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
F88A0801C9EB | In my opinion it is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age. If you're committed to anything you will always want to achieve that certain goal. Having a career you are committed to at a young age has many positive outcomes. One of the outcomes is you can find a career much faster. Another positive outcome is having a goal that you want to achieve. The final positive outcome is having more time in high school to do other activities. Having a certain career you want to achieve at a young age will make you improve on lots of things.
You will find a career much faster if you're committed to one specific career at a young age. If you are focused on that certain career you will be doing things that you need to achieve to have that certain career you have been planning at a young age. For example when you are committed to that one certain career you will be taking specific classes. Finally when you sign up for that career or try out for that career you will most likely get accepted since you will have experience. Having experience on a career will help you so much when applying for a career. People will most likely see that you have experience and want to hire you. That is why it is better having a career you are committed to at a young age.
If you have a goal you want to achieve at a young age you will do anything to achieve that goal you since you're committed to achieve that goal. It is also just like being committed to a certain career at a young age. For example in order to achieve a goal you will need to do anything it takes to achieve it. As in a career you need to study as much as you can of the career and take classes that will help you achieve the career you are interested in. If you have a goal you will most likely achieve the goal if you try and never give up. If you give up on the goal you will not succeed. Just like in a career you are committed to at a young age. If you give up on the career you will most likely need to find another career and learn new things and start all over. That is why you should have a career already planned at a young age so you won't give up later on and need to start all over.
You will have more time in high school to do more activities if you are committed to a certain career at a young age. For example in high school their are many sports , clubs , and other after school activities you can do or tryout for. If you already have a certain career in mind since you were little and young you can have more time to do sports and other activities that can also help achieve that certain career you are interested in. Also it is good having more time to do other things instead of still not knowing what career you want and having to speak to counselors , teachers , and searching up careers you are interested in doing. If you already planned your career when you were young you won't have to worry about having to look for a career and having to stress out. Some students stress out if they don't have a career in mind and not knowing what career they want to do. Having more time to yourself and not needing to worry about finding careers is much better than looking for careers and needing to take new classes to have that certain career that you are just planning to have. That is why it is better to be committed to a career at a young age.
Overall having a career to be committed to at a young age is better than not having any career planned out for the future. You will get the career quicker than usual. You will have an achievement you will want to accomplish. You will have a better schedule to do and focus on other things. This will improve lots of your characteristics and improve you as a person. It will show you how committed you are and how you can get anything done. When you get the career youve been committed to since you were young you will be proud of yourself since you have been committed and focus on that career like all your life. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F893E9ED1F0C | Should school have to add one and half hours to each day? I disagree because student have to do stuff after school like some student have practice for sports and more. Another reasons why I disagree is because student might not like school and it can get boring. Something else why I disagree is because parents might want you after school for something and if you come from school late them can't do what your parents are telling u want to do.
Some reasons why I disagree is because you might have to do thing after school. Something are you might have sports practice for a team or for clubs. Another reason why is because some students have family things to do out of school and it would be for a long time. Some student would have doctor appoints and that is very important.
Another reasons why I disagree is because student will get bored in school. Some student can start to get mad try to leave the school and get in trouble and the student can get in a fight. Something else is that student can fall asleep and not pay attention to the teachers and they can get trouble as well as the student can stay even longer. Something is that they would not be able to learn if they fall asleep.
Last reasons why I disagree is because parents might need their child after school for something. There parents might need them to help clean them clean there house. If they need to tell them something important. Another reason why is because there parents might need help to buy food for there house. Some parents might not like that because they would not be able to see there child for a long time.
That why I disagree because school is just for certain time it not all day. Some student will get bored and not want to come school again. They might have thing to do after school like sports and practices or other thing. Some student parent might need help from there child and would want to see them more time not for a little while. That why I disagree that we should not have add and half hours to each day. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
F89738650EDF | Self-esteem comes from achievement. My reason for saying this is because you shouldn't be getting praised for a low assignment that they did; then they are not going to grow. My other reason was that teachers are here to help students improve and if the student know they didn't the best they could've and get praised for it; then they're going to think that they don't have to do that much and will have a low self-esteem.
To elaborate more on my first reason for why I say self-esteem comes from achievement is because if you do excellent on a paper and are positively sure you did amazing then you should be getting praised. That shows how much a student can have a high self-esteem for themselves. Even though, the paper probably wasn't easy that person didn't get lazy. They wanted to do better which means that they want to grow and improve not just stay where they are.
I am going to explain my second reason for why self-esteem comes from achievement. This is all about the students and how they improve. Therefore, if a student knows they could've done better on an assignment and get praised for the lazy work that did then they are going out think that they don't need to do that much work anymore. Although, as the teacher; they shouldn't be praising students on lazy work. They should pull them aside and say " hey this was good but it wasn't you best work; I know you can do better".
My counterclaim is teachers shouldn't let students get away with lazy work. I say this because sometimes some students might think that the teachers don't pay attention to them or they don't care about their work. Even though, if the student approaches the teacher with a problem then the teacher will remember you and know to check up on you when it comes to your work.
In conclusion, true self-esteem does not come from praise on an effortless assignment. If you praise students on a low assignment then that's the level they are going to stay at because they got praised to be lazy. Which means that the teacher leaves the student not wanting to improve and expand on their writing skills.
Sincerely,
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F8A3497B5F2D | Many schools allow their students to visit different types of companies so they could explore many interested jobs,for example schools and companies get in a deal to help students to get knowledge for their future and also companies allow students to be able to visit and get information in their occupations,I know as a fact that students can be professionals in what they want with good knowledge,as a example my whole family went through all of that and know they have become lawyers,doctors,and one of them works for the president. If managers give students the opportunity to visit their occupations,students who work hard won't lose that excellent opportunity,and managers would have an amazing great roll in students achievement which I know it would help the company. Although some say that companies should not give me the opportunity to explore and visit their occupations because if the company that I went to visit doesn't have that much of of opportunities for me to discover,whether I'm interested in what they have,and I may be disappointed ,and probably I would have in mind to talk bad about the company that they don't have sufficient knowledge or information,actually companies should give me the opportunity to explore and visit their occupations because I would have a great experience of the excellent opportunities that they may have,and I as a student I will have the experience to explore and get some knowledge at a young age of the opportunities that I can be able to get if I prepare to have a amazing future.
Some say that companies should not give me the opportunity to explore and visit their occupations because if the company that I went to visit doesn't have that much of of opportunities for me to discover,whether I'm interested in what they have,and I may be disappointed ,and probably I would have in mind to talk bad about the company that they don't have sufficient knowledge or information,for example,my older brother had the opportunity to visit an important company called "Dream Big"he expect that in that company they would have information about what he was interest,but sadly it didn't went that well,my brother was sad and angry at the same time,so he made a fake account to talk about the company ,as a result the company decrease in a 20% of people that were involved.
Companies should give me the opportunity to explore and visit their occupations because I would have a great experience of the excellent opportunities that they may have,for example,my mother always tells me a story about how she became a lawyer,she said that as a student,she was preparing herself for the future,thanks to school,they gave her a chance to explore and get some knowledge about lawyers in a company called "Everything is possible,if you believe it"she had the chance as a lawyer to meet the president,also there is a story about her in the internet,she became a lawyer because she had the opportunity.
I as a student I will have the experience to explore and get some knowledge at a young age of the opportunities that I can be able to get if I prepare to have a amazing future for example,I read about an incredible woman who know is a professional chemistry teacher ,in the story gave details about how she became who she is it doesn't specific which company she went to learn about her career,but the point is that she has an excellent job,because she got prepare for it.
Although some say that companies should not give me the opportunity to explore and visit their occupations because if the company that I went to visit doesn't have that much of of opportunities for me to discover,whether I'm interested in what they have,and I may be disappointed ,and probably I would have in mind to talk bad about the company that they don't have sufficient knowledge or information,actually companies should give me the opportunity to explore and visit their occupations because I would have a great experience of the excellent opportunities that they may have,and I as a student I will have the experience to explore and get some knowledge at a young age of the opportunities that I can be able to get if I prepare to have a amazing future. As a result schools and companies help students in their goal to have a knowledge with their interest,and for sure parents would be thankful. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
F8B49772E887 | Therefore, I agree with being honest all the time because it will help you gain trust with other. This can also sat that the person think's you are loyal and trustworthy and that they can believe in you more then they already did. Yes is may hurt the person feelings,but, you are there to help them get though it and make them feel OK.
When being honest with people it can build up trust with you two because they know that you can talk about things without lying. This can also effort how they see you as a person. Even if the truth hurts them they know that you were able to tell them what was happening or if someone was saying something bad about them. This can also build up trust and build up friendship and relationship. People don't like it when you lie to them because it hurts them and makes them feel bad about them self.
Honesty can change how people view you as a person. They can even see if you would be loyal to them when they need you the most. They can also see if your a real friend or something more with being honest. This can also give you respect that you want or need. When I said they would view you different I meant by your personalty and how you are as a person.
Yes, honesty can hurt them,but, lying hurts the most. Why I'm saying this because honesty can hurt but it make them feel better because they have someone they trust and believ them, a real friend. Lying and changing up the word can hurt them and even mess them up and change them. That why I agree with being honest all the time. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F8BA702A8450 | Dear principal,
I think students should be required to this perform service so student's could learn a lot about reading. Because it is very important for student's to learn how to read stories and understand more about language arts. Also its very important for students to join the community service to graduate to college and get a job. Also i also recommend this to student so they could grow up one day and be a teacher or a doctor this is a good require. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
F8C7B0C9F064 | Some businesses and schools around the world have adopted a four-day of work week to conserve resorces and energy. Although some say that my school should not adopt a four-day of school week and should not extend two hours of school day to conserve resorces and energy because we dont use our resorces and energy in vain , actually my school should adopt a four-day school week and extend two school hours to conserve resorces and energy because we will have a better environment and we will administrate energy.
Those who believe that my school should not adopt a four-day of school week and should not extend two hours of school day to conserve resorces and energy have their reasons. One of the most disputed reason is that, our school does not use it resorces and energy in vain, beause we use energy and resorces to facilitate our studies and to have better opportunities to learn. And they also say that if we have a four-day school week wont make any change.
However, my school should adopt a four-day school week and extend two hours of school day because we will have a better environment. According to an article written in my county says that, "The used of resorces in my school has increased by 70%. Even more, it says that because the over abuse of resorces in our school the amount of trees cutted has enhace around our county and its harming our enviroment." That is giving a bad reputation to our school and county because our school does not recycle and reused our resorces .
Also, my school should adopt a four-day school week and extend two hours because we will administrate energy. The using of computers, smart borads, and all kinds of technological devices in our school have increased, do to the extraordinary amount of students our school possess. Our school has the biggest amount of students in all the county. So, do to the amount of students in our school the use of computers has increased. According to an save energy a webside, "80% of schools energy is used in computers and other technical divises." By having a four-day school week and extending two hours of school day will limited the used of computers and it will make our school better.
many people have say that my school should not adopt a four-day of school week and should not extend two hours of school day to conserve resorces and energy because we dont use our resorces and energy in vain. But as you can see adopting a four-day school week and extend two school hours to conserve resorces and energy will be benefial to our school and to our society.
Wouldn't you agree with that? What if that was happening at your house? wouldn't you put a limit to the use of energy at your house to make your bills go down? Think about it!! | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
F8F503B765DA | i say that we shoudn't have more hours of school , because it will just make us be more sterssed b working. we wil barly have free time to o what t do but more time time in school wil make us tired and weak we will need more food. it will cost the school more food and it wil cost more money and light to wast on teaching. Kids won't learn because they are going to say why did they put more school time and thats all they are going to say the the whole time. It will make it all more busy for the teachers they will get mad and say how they can't do that much hours they got kids they got thing to take care of.
The school will need to whas't more money on food and electicion bill just for one more hour of education and kids won't even learn alote because they will be to busy complaining and say that they want to go home. the school board will just was't money for no reason. school is doing good already so do not mess it up by an hour of school. The teacher will work more time ,so they will get paid more. So if u do put one more hour of school if a kid needs to stay after would they stay an other hour of school that would mean that the teacher would gets a bigger pay cheack and that would be alote of students so teachers would have to stay for ciuds to so that would be longer and by the time its done it will be dark.
The school will need more volnenters because they don't want to pay teachers more already because they already do because they have an other hour of school left so they will have to beg the teachers to volnter to to stay. School will need to think of more thing to do in the school to fill up the hour.
we will not want to go to school. we will be so tired and and to know that we have an other hour of school i would be done for the day. I would not feel like going to school every day because i would be more tired . it will give me less free time to us because we got sleep earlyer because we are tired.
we will get mad because we don't got free time alote and that would effect our school day. Kids will feel that school is to much work and might tell there parents and the parents might tell the school to lower it down. The school will will get complans form parents that there kid is stressing to much so that would be bad and school will have to cancil the one hour. Thats why i think it is a bad idea to put one more hour of school all of the people will disagree i would to because it will just make me stressed out and give less free time. I think school should leave the hours alone since they don't have to deal with the work and tired ness they don't have to think twice.
I think it is dumb to add an hour more because it can mess up every thing. If every thing is doing good then it should stay like that if we need to change it we should all chose if we want a to have one more hour or not. We are the important voteers so why leave us out of it. We are the ones who get tried ,so one more hour and 30 mintues is not good for are bodys even worse if you have after school or a clud. The money that you had to use for the extra time could go to better things like new computers for us. Or it could help for better lunches or better gym oqupment or mucic things and make the school better by painting it or somthing. Instead of was'ting it on one hour of paying teachers. I would like to have free time not streeing out about doing work and being done and haveing little free time. Thats why i think it would be better if we did not get one hour of school and just be the same. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F8F7785B285B | The lesson for elementary students is what kind of the subject that each students are really into. There are manys of subjects lesson like science english math history etc
The lesson would i like to share to students is sign laungue. This is new lesson for students to commutity with others while using their own hands. Not manys people don't know what is sign laungue. It alright to teach sign laungue to students because one day they met someone who know only sign laungue so he/she can commutity to the person.
There are some school that are teaching students sign laungue to commutity in the real world. Sign laungue is still use til this day around the globe. Why sign laungue was made for? There not manys people can hear or talk so he/she use sign laungue to commitity to others to people around.
Even though things are different in sign laungue and talking to commutity. You remember even words to commutity to person or people and in sign laungue you'll remember every hands sign to commutity to the person or people. It choice for your own if you want to learn something new in sign laungue.
Sign laungue is not the only thing that people doesn't know. The people who can't see he/she use morise is code to learn it almost like reading but it to learn in real world. Ever letters and numbers have code like sign laungue. They are both different but unquie ways to learn. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
F8FD4F6B6DE6 | Dear, Generic_Name
The issue on this prompt is that positive attitude is the key to success in life. Even if you do not feel well, we need to show a good attitude to people. A positive attitude is always important in our life.
Show a positive attitude when you are in school or work is really important, to any place that we go always be respectful with people. I agree with this statement as a result that if we want to achieve our goals, first thing that we need to do is always be with a good attitude to everything. The importance of attitude is that people will treat you, like the way you speak to them.
What people like teacher, students, and doctors achieve is as a result that they were success in life to achieve what they are now. These person always were with a positive attitude to achieve what they want to do. Sometimes depend on how our personality looks like, people evaluate ourselves.
Like I said to triumph in life, we need to obey life lesson. Sometimes we learn the importance of attitude from another person. Positive attitude teach us to appreciate life, as a result that some people can not have education. some people that do not have attitude they never go to school, as a result that they don't think positive. A good education is like a positive attitude, we can achieve great things.
Sincerely,
Generic_Name | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
F8FE41D805D0 | Technology has gotten better through out the years in every ways. Many people believe that technology has a negative affect on peoples lives. I believe that technology has a positive effect on peoples lives in many ways.
The limitation of human contact due to the use of technology has a positive effects on people's lives. The reason why technology has a positive effect on people is because it makes most people's life easier and there're cars that drive for you. For example, now a days you can order your grocery online and just pick it up at the store in a certain amount of time. This type of service allows people to be more confident on technology and it saves you some time. Therefore, manny people take advantage of the technology and use it for goods.
In adition to that, technology allows you to get to place faster and safer. For example, they have cars that are design to drive by themselves. This is a positive effet because some people dont like driving in traffic and they now have the car to do that for them. Therefore, when you are in a party and you had drank toomuch you can call a taxi or if you have an advance that can drive by itself, you can take it. There're many ways technology can be helpfull in society.
In clonclusion technology can be a positive and negative effect in peoples lives. Knowing how to utilies it in the right time and place can be helpful. But, not knowing how to use it can cost you bad things. Overall i believe thta technology can cure and save people from lots of things. To conclude, echnology is great, and it will grow bigger and bigger in the future. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
F8FE459205F4 | Do you agree with churchill's statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success?
Should i agree that when someone fail and if they continuo doing what they were doing they will success later on?
I'm agree because when you make mistakes you'll learnd from it, and next time when you do it you will be better than what have you done in the past. If you are a failure and if you keep trying then i'm proud of you because thats the mean that you're in the good path and that you'll achive your goals soon. My reasons are nobdy is perfect and no one will be perfect ever, my second reason is even famous people have fail and now they're in the top, and my tird reason is there are some people who like to accomplish their dreams by working hard and never letting other people stop them.
To start with nobody is perfect, is because we all can make mistakes and also because it is okay to make mistakes, no one had died because they fail doing something like work from school or stuff from work. So it is like when you go to other country and you have to try new things like their languge, their food. their traditions and all the stuff that their country have and I konw that sometimes to feel like you'll never be like them, you'll never understand what they are saying, but it is false because I am a immigrant, I came to the United States when I was 14 years old not knowing any english, with only one person by my side that was my mom, and leaving everything behind. For one moment I think that I was never going to get used to this country, that I was never going to understand english and that I was never going to be enough to this country but now I can say that I can speak english I can writte in english and that all the people (brothers,and sister)
that I left behind I still love and that someday I will returned and I will tell them everything.
To continuo with famous people had failed in their past, and i'm saying this is people I know that to be where they are now they have done alot of work and they've done alot of sacrifices too like leaving their family behind because they did no support them or maybe because they didn't like that profession, friends becuase some of them are fake or maybe because they want to help them to progress, maybe schools need to be more focus about they work like wrinting songs or even focusing more in their dance, works because you need to choose the one that you like more, and I can tell that it did not stop them, they keep fighting to be better each day to give all the best about them to have a mentality about progress. I've seen alot of famous videos about people that I like and i've cried because some of their stories are really sad and I know what they where feeling that time. You can follow famous people and i admire them because they have fail millions of time and they've never stop doing what they love to do.
To finallice with that if you are one of those persons who like to accomplished dreams then you should never give up because thats what looser (mediocre) people do, they give up when they see that something is hard or maybe because they are shy about them how they look like if they are pretty or no or maybe because they don't like their work because the people is mean or their managge is agressive in the term how he express so they decide to quit. We always tried to put the best and to be the best of us even when you know that you can fail, that there are other people that are good too but you tried and you put effort on it so if you fail you'll know that you win because to did it and you finished it. You never can think that you are a failure if you didn't win, you can see that you are good in some other things where other people is no good. You will always have options you can choose if you want to tried hard or if you don't.
To conclude I am strongly agree that failure plays in the pursuit of success because nobody is perfect and if someone wants to be perfect then they'll need alot of work, we also know that even famous people have fail so if they have fail we should fail too beause then we will see what we had done wrong and we can fix it, and also even when it means that you need to leave that people that you love behind. Furthermore even though sometimes it takes a little too long to notified how much we have success and because we don't see that, we're mad with our lifes, we think that if we don't have a good possition at our work is because were not good enough but it is not truth because they are some people that doesn't have work or some others supplies and were complaining about our possition at work. It is not fair to have that kind of mind because we all should be happy with what we have and with what we can affort. Furthermore been a failure doesn't mean that you don't know how to do something or that you can not win. Been a failure means that for more that you fail the better you get and the more capacity you'll have later. | 3.5 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
F9069F051AD1 | I think an enjoyable educational activity for me is Gym. Because gym is the most fun class I have this year these are some examples of why I like gym. the first reason why I like gym is because during the warm up we are aloud to talk to our friends while we are walking. Also another reason why is when we finish doing our warm up we get to play games or do fun activities. the last reason why is we could also go outside to do games or activities when it is nice outside.
The first reason why I enjoy the beginning of gym is because you can walk around the gym and talk to your friends.
. And not have to wait to talk till lunch to talk all you want. But the main reason why I like that part of gym is because I love to talk even though at sometimes I got nothing to talk about. Another reason why is that I love hanging out with my friends or to hear about there problems. talking helps you feel much better and lonely so i think that talking is fun and important at the same time.
then the other reason why I like gym is because we get to play fun games or activities sometimes. Because I like getting distracted from stuff with something fun like a game or activities. The fun games could help someone feel relaxed and forget about something that might be worrying them. another reason why I like that is because l think it is much more fun than having to be in health, Doing the pacer or doing push ups. But other people do enjoy those stuff but I highly dislike doing those things. but the games could help you get some exercise and keep you having fun the gym class instead of being bored and exercising
The last and final reason why I like gym is because sometimes we go outside when the weather is nice to do activities or other stuff like that. I like going outside because I like it when it is nice and warm out to be doing exercise. It is also nice to be out there and be racing or playing soccer and maybe football. But it is also big outside to be holding all of the gym classes together and the teachers could teach together. And you could also do much more outside even though some people dont like going outside I think it is much better because their is much more space and more fresh air. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
F9072F36ECE7 | Dear Business Manager.
First of all this essay is written with the meaning of what kind of occupations I would like to do as student, which is good to know that there is someone that is interested on helping students like me, also as student I would like to start by the right way and taking what is the best for me for example what is going to be a job which will make me feel comfortable to know that my qualities and my knowledge will play an important roll depending of the job that I might get.
To tell you more about what I like to do is simple and easy at the same time, it doesn't matter how hard something it gets for me because in the end I always end up pulling through, althought I like to think before make a choise because is always hard when I do stuffs at the very beginning with no concern or knowledge of what am I suppose to do.
In this case, as a beginner I get excited no matter what the work it might be, I can tell that I'm not afraid to begin with new chalenges. So one of the reasons you should invite me for job oportunities is because unlike the rest of my partners at school they don't have the spirit of a fighter like I do, because I always try to give it all I've got because I know this is my heart and like my dad told me ones if "if you don't fight for it don't expect for the things that you want to come for you", and to prove myself that I can be someone on this world having a good job and be respected for it,so I can be able to support myself and my family as well, work hard in every little single thing I do is what I have to make sure that I can be capable and responsible of doing it.
In the other hand let's say that at least for now I want to graduate from high school, then go to college to start a career of mechanic, because mechanic is the number one on my checklist in other words my favorite, however this is would it be a big opportunity if you actually choose me for the job opportunity, because as it is for me this is going to be a really good starting for me, after all I think I can show you what I mean by saying I don't give up because my father always told me when I was a little kid; no matter what happens after I had to give it all, never leave a little bit of what I could let on my effort, also because he is been a great example for me since I was a kid or since I remember my childhood. Instead of being a bad boy, he showed me what do I have to to with my values and things that really matter to me, so that is pretty much of what I can be capable of when it becomes to a responsibility.
Persistent is other word that goes with my personality, if you want someone who really want to do something when it becomes to work, I think I might have the qualities that you are looking for any kind of job. So that's my response to what you might be looking for, i just hope that you can choosr me, Thanks. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
F90A25704212 | Have you ever been in class unsure about what your learning even though you have been paying attention? I'm sure that would be majority of upper classmen students. I can admit I've have been several of times, In my opinion distance learning is a wonderful idea. Students can move at their own pase , you can replay the lesson video as much as needed , and it will prevent you from failing a class.
School can be stressful expecially when you miss a day and you feel like your behind on everything. Then when the teacher explains it to you , If you don't understand you might not want to ask for him/her to repeat it again. This can be avoided by the power of distance learning you'll be able to have classes online so you can move at your own paste. You wouldn't have to worry about asking a staff or classmate what you missed. Also you can take notes and do your classwork whichever way it works best for you.
However some students are visual and independent learners they focus better when they work by themselves. Working in a group at times might not always be the best option. When reviewing for a test or quiz you can go back and reread ,study, and take notes on whatever you're struggling with. Those notes can be reviewed as much as you want. If you're a type of person that has to have things repeated to you multiple times this is a great opportunity for you.
Last but not least , Are you failing a class due to not having enough time to turn your work in? You would probably not have to worry about that anymore because you can do your work at anytime. In class you are given a time limit you have to turn in your assigment. When your doing it online yes im sure there is a due date but you're not told what time your suppose to start at. If your at sports practice or have any free time you can start working on it. In my opinion this will prevent you from failing a class because you can turn it in whenever your ready to.
To sum it up this is an amazing opportunity alot of students should be looking to attend. If your school is offering this to you I highly recommend it. It can keep you on track and motivate you to complete and turn your work in on time so you don't fall behind in class. You can move at your own paste without anyone rushing you. And lastly, you can replay and reread anything as you would like with no limits. This is a big help for students who want to reach their goal of earning a diploma. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
F90A6181BBCA | In this world many of us make decisions by ourselves and others seek guidance to make decisions in their life. While some people argue that people should seek guidance to make decisions in their life, but I think it is more beneficial if people make their own decisions because if people make their own decisions they will develop their self confidence and they will become responsible person. Also, if people make their own decisions they will have happier life in the the future.
It's true that by making our own decisions that we will develop our self confidence and become responsible person. If person make decision that decision might be hard, after making the decision the person will develop his or hers self confidence and they will become responsible for the decision that they made. For example, if one person decides to leave his parents house to live by his own, he will be responsible for himself because he decided not to live with his parents no more. This will help him to be responsible person because he has to take care of himself by his own. Another example can be, In school, Students choose their classes for next year by themselves. This will help them to develop their self confidence because they are deciding what is better for them or not by their own. Also, this will help them to decide and have a confidence in what they will major in the future. So, by making our own decisions we can develop our self confidence and become responsible person.
Secondly, It's also true that by making our own decisions we will be happy and have happier life. When people make important decisions by themselves and if they achieve their goal by making this decision they will become happy and they can have happier life. For instance, if one student decided not to go college, instead he wanted to become a soccer player. If the student worked hard and become a professional soccer player he will be happy and will have happier life because he decided to become a professional soccer player by himself instead of going college. Additionally, In school, When I was sophomore, I was choosing classes for next year and I decided to take classes that I thought that are important for me and that can help me for college. Then when I take the classes this year I was very happy of my decision because this classes helped me a lot. So, people should make their own decision because they will be happy and have happier life by the decision they made.
On the other hand, some people argue that people should seek guidance to make decisions in their life because it helps them not to make wrong decisions, but I think that is wrong because if you always seek guidance to make decision in your life the decision that you made may not satisfy you in your future life. For example, if your parents advice you to make decision to become a doctor and if you made a decision to be a doctor by listening your parents ,in the future you might have bad life because being a doctor might not be part of your life. Also, you will experience difficulties in your life because your decision is influenced by others. So, people should make their own decision because it helps them to become better self confident person. By making our own decision we can gain a lot in our life.
Finally, people should make their own decision because it will help them to develop their self confidence and to become a better person by being responsible. Also, by making their own decision they will have a better life in the future. People should make their own decision to become better person by achieving their goals. Additionally, peoples have to make a decision by themselves because they can gain a lot in their life. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
F9111CF0A009 | one topic that is that is frequently debate today is'' four-day school week.'' Some people think is better for students, so they can have three days free to do their homework and have a par time job. I believe that students don't need four-day school and extend the school day two hours, because some students can't work after school or do our homework, students can't have time for our families in afternoon. and students can't have three days off and after come and they will not remember what they learn last class.
one reason why is students can't work after school or do their homework because students will come tire after ten hours on school. student will come late and they will come just to have a dinner and sleep. students will come so late that they will not be able to do their homework on time do to no time for them. students need five day to do what they normally do they will have time for homework, have a dinner, and sleep well everyday. and the next they they can come ready to learn more and enjoy the school hours.
another reason why is that students will not have time for their families. students having ten hours in the school come tires and they don't want to talk not event with their families. Some students come straight to the bed and their families don't have time to talk to them or give an advice. Some families have the tradition to go out like five or six at clock but students will not be able to go out with families and friends. that's why students need the normal days to study they have a routine that they follow.
The final reason why is that students can't take three days off and after come they will not remember what they learn last class. Some teachers choose that Monday is a really good day to start with a test or quiz students will not remember what they learn after three days with out study. Sometimes students are learning a topic really important and they understand but when they come after three days off they will not remember anything. If students will have three days off they will work these days and when they come back to school after three days of they will not be able to remember everything they will forget. students need the five days to study how suppose to be.
as you have read four-day school is not good idea because students will not have time to study do their homework and enjoy with their families. If students have four days school, ten hours at day students will be tire and they will not here the same routine that they use to have. Only when students have the normal school days they will have time to learn more and focus more. and have the best time as possible with family. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F91EFD0443E6 | Have you ever though of people who use technology has limit their communication to others? Nowadays people who use technology are consistent spending their time on electronic device. Technology has a negative impact on human lives due to their daily routine.
The first reason is people's communication skills will decrease over time. Spending a lot of time on technology without comminicating with others, will affect your communication skills. Therefore, talking to someone who you haven't talked with for a while can be awkward. This shows that understanding between two people might have consequence and will be not accurate than it should be.
The second reason, people who use electronic device are unlikely aware of the surroundings. For example, people who are walking in street using headset or earbuds on that cover their ears is a bad choice. This shows a sign of danger, because you won't be hearing anything. People who are aware of surrounding are more safe to cross a street and communicate with people who are passing by. This shows a negative effect of people who block their earing has higher chance to get into a accident.
Some people say that technology helps them communicate by commenting on a website which is true, but that is not important because the person will be not always active and able to comment back on time, whenever they are on. If you are communicate in person you can read the person's mood. You can get a faster respond than waiting for the person to comment back. In this way is more accurate and able to trust each other more by communicating in person that you have meet or have not meet before.
The final reason is library is more accurate than reading books online. For example like reading online recommendation is not always accurate because of the people's preferance. You can ask the librarian for recommendation and librarian also assist you whenever you need help. You can read on your device but it is limited because of the battery. Unlike books, have no battery which means it doesn't have any limit. This shows reading on books is a better than reading on a device.
In conclusion technology had a negative effect on people lives. People should be aware that around them and spend their time in their technology on a necessary way. There should be a limit of how much time you are using on technology. Is better to communicate in person and don't wear anything that cover your ears while talking to someone. This affect our daily lives, so limit the time you use in technology. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
F92C1E979556 | Let be honest, have you ever thought much can you have done if you always doing something? The work be more essay, you can take less time than if you do it all at once in this way you are always working on it. And always working on something and no be it idle, its the essay way the you get what you want because you do something today its going to be useless in the future. Sencodely doing always something it is the best way you accomplishment yours goals and make your's dreams came true in life. Also you can discover so many new things in the you didn't know about, new topic the you didn't even know their exist.
How essay i can make my work if i'm always doing something and not doing all at once, well its will take me less time so i can invest in other things. In the same way i have more time so i can do my work better and time think and analyze exactly what i doing ,and make sure the its correct. However so says that be it idle something it will not help you do thing better, every need their time, although take your time will no help to accomplishment your goals and a fast time of period or not doing you work at all.
Furthermore to accomplish more in life the highest quality will be always working on something. For example when you want to graduate for hing school. You start 9 grade you want good great to pass your classes, and the best way to get good grades is doing your homework, class work,and, finished eve thing on time. In 12 grade all the work the you did in the pass is want you need to grades so always doing somethings the best way to get want you wanted to be. Every occasion doing is the best option to anything dream the you have make real treatment, you see how much you have done in the present and also work for you future.
Thomas Jefferson said "It is wonderful how much may be done if you always doing" to determine it's a simple like reading a bout book you are doing, you discovered new staffs you can learn about, history, math, out spaces,oceanography. Doing you work you learn new skill in work, going to school, watching a movie, doing is not all does not have to only doing work, or accomplishment goals, doing is about want you like. You have more done than being inactivating or waiting the same else to want you have to do.
Finally you accomplishment more doing something their not doing anything, if you want to be successful in life always doing something as discovery, make your dream came true and start doing right so in the future you can have a benefit of this. you want to make a change in your life or impact is same else always do something in life going to be more essay. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F93A5B7E57AF | Being ourselves in a world strongly influenced,manipulated,and corrupted by people. Make a big difference in our lives .This also make us to know, who we are. Because we should not change our personality,our cultures,and how we were educated.
Although being like other people make us to socialize easily. Nevertheless, we should not change our personalities. Because our personality is what help us to become our dreams in reality. For example there is a case of two guys who were twins one of them was nice all the time, and the other rude because he was influenced by his friends all the time having even a weird personality, that nobody liked. They attended to the same school their last year in high school, the one who was rude had many problems and one of those problems took him to death, however, his brother who was upset by his death, never stopped being a nice guy and having a great personality,he graduated from high school and attended to one of the best universities in the United States. Additonally having a real personality without any change help us to be more honest with ourselves. I remember last year in my math class my teacher told us to check our assigment by ourselves. In the honor system and I only got six of the ten questions right which was a sixty percent I told her the true and after she checked she gave points extra, she said that I deserved for being honest. In fact our personality gaves us an attitude and help us to be honest with ourselves.
Another important reasons for which we should keep being ourselves is because we should not lose our culture. Because our culture makes us special and different to the rest. For example there is a story of a girl who moved from Colombia to Canada where she always practiced her culture even made a club with her traditions that colombian people in Canada visited,so she became famous really fast and made a lot of money. Additionally it is important to keep our culture in anywhere because the culture is an important legacy that children adapt from their parents. One amazing example of this is Leonel Messy a great soccer player, from Argentina, who has been living in Spain for a long time. However he is still practicing his culture and does not change his accent thanks to his family which made him to beloved by all Latin America. Therefore keeping practice our cultures will make our families, and others to be proud of us
Also it is important to be ourselves, to show how we were educated. Due to our education is what define by itself how we threat other people. For example on the newspaper was written a story of a guy who teached a long time ago English to his students in a particular way giving them candies when they participated,he never changed his method and all his students got good scores always. Actually our education is most the most need in our life. For example my uncle graduated from high school and ten years after that. He attended to college and the university where he studied languages now he has a family an really good life,but he never stopped being the nice man he was and still being today.
in conclusion,we must continue to be ourselves in anywhere, anytime to have a real and nice personality. That will open doors to become our dreams true. Also to keep our culture alive for the next generations. Making our families proud of ourselves. Finally it is important to be ourselves because it shows the way we were educated. Because a good education brings a good life. Therefore being ourselves bring so much good things to our life, that we should not change by the influence of other people. | 4.5 | 3 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
F951F260E983 | Would you ever likeit is someone was not honest with you? My opinion is you should be honest all the time. Sometimes when you are honest it can hurt someones feeling but would you rather someone lie to you or be honest with you?
If you are honest it can get you in less troubel when you tell the truth and not lie. When you are homest it gives you a good reputaion that what it gives you when you are not honest. When you tell people the truth people trust you more.
When you are honest with people they trust you more and that make you someone who they can always talk to and you should be proud of yourself. If someone was ever dishonest with you would you want to have someone in your life that lies to you? You wont be able to tell them anything because they are not trustworthly . When you are honest more people want to be your friend because people like someone who is honest and wont lie.
When you dont lie to people it gives you a good reputaion because you are being honest. When you are honest to your teacher friends famlies when ever you do someithing they can belive you because they trust you that you are teeling them the truth and not lieing to them. People might know you as a honest person. When you are dishonest it afects your reputation
When you are honest it can get you in less trouble. In school being honest can get you in less trouble than what you would get when you lie. With your parents it gets you in less touble when you tell the truth because they dont like it when you lie. can trust you when you go out.
In conclusion being hounest can help you get threw problems with anyone. Helps you in life when you dont lie. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
F95CE6B81C75 | It is important to accomplish something in the future because it will help you find your dream job, It is one of your top hobbies and it will guide you to your strength.
To begin, you need to accomplish something you are struggling with in order to find your dream job. One thing you can accomplish is something that is school related. In fact, when I was in 4th grade disliked art class even when my sister said it was fun and easy I would just refuse everything that is related to art. In 5th grade as a student I was required to take art class and I thought that it would boring to be in a art class. In the middle of 5th grade I actually changed my mind about art class, sooner or later I found out that art class was something that I wanted to finish. Ever since 5th grade my mood for art class grew to be one of my likings. As a 8th grader now I am still taking art class and it is actually really enjoyable to be in art.
Secondly, it will help you find your hobby and your needs. Another thing you can do to accomplish something like English class or even just school in general is trying your best. Even when you think you can just skip it, you will somehow come back to it. In fact, when I was in 6th grade my grades were A's and C's one class however was an F, that class was English class. I didn't do my homework for English class and rejected help from the English teacher. In the beginning of 7th grade that same subject was getting harder and my grade for English decreased. At the middle of marking period 3 I decided that I had to do the classwork so I can create a new habit of trying to do work. I soon found out when I was trying to complete my missing work there was one assignment that caught my eye, That assignment was a book report that was supposed to be written. I tried the book report and soon I realized that I loved writing.
Lastly, completing something that is a challenge for you will help you find your strength in a certain subject and finding your strength will help you graduate. In fact, when I accomplished art class in 5th grade I found out that art was one of my strengths that was I only needed to try. I also found out that writing was something that could help me graduate and get me to my find one of my two careers. Art class helped me learn that I am actually really creative and helped me figure out that art was something that relieved my stress when it comes to school. English class helped me figure out that writing was one of my strengths and it will help me figure out my main career.
In conclusion, if you accomplish something like your challenges it would incourage you to find your dream job, Help you find one of your hobbies, and will support you to graduate. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F97469E0877C | Many people agree that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life because it make you stronger. Positive attitude make you see things different. And also people with positive attitude live a better life. Positive attitude is something that we all should have because is something necessary to achieve your goals. It also help you improve as a person.
Positive attitude make feel stronger. When you fail, but you have a positive attitude you try on till you achieve your goals. Sometimes students are failing their classes, but they have positive attitude to work harder they end up passing their classes. Also with positive attitude people are mentally stronger because even when they fail they know how to overcome in that situation.
Positive attitude make you see things different. Many people say that having a positive attitude is a good way to solve your problems. People are able to recognize their mistakes, so they don't make the some mistakes in the future. I had a bad grade in one of my classes because that class was very hard, but i always have a positive attitude and i start paying more attention in class, i start working harder, and my grade went up and now i have a good grade.
People with positive attitude live a better life. People are not stressed even if they are passing a bad moment in their work. Having a positive attitude make you healthier because you are not always mad and that is very important for your health. In my house we all have positive attitude and that is the key to be happy and success in life.
And finally in the conclusion many people agree that having a positive attitude is the key to success in life because it make you stronger. Positive attitude make you see things different. And also people with positive attitude live a better live. these are some of the reasons why people agree that positive attitude is the key to success. In the other side we have the people that disagree that a positive attitude is the key to success in life because sometimes is not necessary to have a positive attitude to success. And also having a positive attitude does not guarantee you that you will be successful. But many people agree that having a positive attitude is the key to success because if you don't do positive things you will not receive positive things. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 |
F98F9BA65DFB | 89% Percent of the students at Generic_School disagree that the school board should't add an extra one and a half hours to school each day because most of the students have after school jobs and some of them have to watch their siblings and do homework. This Is why the school board shouldn't add more extra time for the student's to stay at school.
Students disagree that the school board should not add extra time to school each day because students Parents have job so they have to watch their siblings for this parents to work and so that they have money to buy food and clothing, pay bills, students like's to watch their siblings because its fun playing with them, watching you're siblings Is a lot of responsibilities because you have to watch them so they dont get hurt, you also have to feed them so they're not starving, and you need to change their cloths so they're not dirty, cleaning the house Is fun while yo're siblings are sleeping because there will be no destruction. You're parents dont have to worry about cleaning the house after they get home.
Being In high school sucks because there's so much stuff that you have to do like home works but projects are tough, home work Is fine but Its too much of works, but you have to do you're home work to keep youre grades up and so that It dont go down, projects are tough so you might want to ask you're friends for some help, youre gonna want to do your projects because If dont you're grades will go down, Studying with you're friends are fun because you're getting to know them more and you can all hang out, passing highs school is the best part because you're parents will be proud of you.
Having a job is cool because you can have you're own money and you don't have to ask your parent's to give you money because you want to buy something, having a job sucks and good at the same time because you're making money from It but you have to go to work after school when you're tired and sleepy, having a job Is nice because you're parent's dont have to give you allowance, having you're friends at the same job as you is fun because you can go to work at the same time.
This Is the reasons why the student sat Generic_School disagree that the school board should not add an extra hour for the students to stay at the school because some most of them have a work to go to and some of them have to get home soon because they're parents have works and nobody will watch their siblings. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
F98FEC21D9EA | Should School Extend Two More Hours To The Normal Schedule?
One topic that is frequently debated is whether school should extend the day schedule or keep a normal schedule as they have it already. Some people think that school should not expend two more hours to our normal schedule. They feel that if we spend two more hours at school, it will be boring and tired. In my opinion, school should extend two more hours to our schedule for many reasons: I can spend more time to learn in classes, spend more time with friends, and work one more day during the week.
Once, I was pretty nervous about my Earth Science SOL test, I did not know what to do to pass it because I never passed any quiz or test that we did during the school year, and I felt worried because I did not understand some topics, and I only had one week to learn everything, so I decided to stay everyday after school to practice with my teacher and by myself at home, after a couple days of practicing I realized that I had learned what I needed to learn and I felt ready to take my SOL and finally, I passed it. Now I know that spending more time in classes helps us to understand what we do not understand yet, learn more about the topics that we are practicing in class, and get ready for any test that we have during the semester.
Sadly, I am a Senior, and this is my last year in High School, and that means that maybe, I will not see some friends and teachers again, so I am trying to enjoy everyday in the school expending time with friends and teachers whether during lunch or during classes, and I think that spending at least 25 more minutes with them in every class will help us to know more about each other, and to make more experiences to remember after we graduate from High School.
As some students, I do not have a permanent job or an everyday job as some people call it, I work for a moving and storage company, and that means that I can only work Saturdays and sometimes Sundays because I come to school and they ask me to be ready in the company at 7:00 am when I am going to work, but having a free day school during the week would benefit me because I would be able to work one more day during the week, and earn extra money to buy something that I might need.
As you have read, I am agree about extend the school day two more hours. Only when we realize that spending more time at school would helps us to learn easier, make a lot of experiences with friends and teachers, and gives us a free day school to work, to do homework, to spend time with family, or do some chores at home, the world will be a better place with students that understand what they need to understand about their classes, and people who takes advantage of at least one day free per week. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F998E8BD71CF | Dear Generic_Name,
I would like to visit your hospital one day.
I would like to be a midwives nurse but in order for me to pursed that education.
I will have to see what I have to do.
people say I would need a masters degree to become a midwives nurse.
All I can say is that I am really good with babies.
I would like to tell you why I would like to be a midwives nurse.
Ever sense I laid eyes on my baby cousin.
I wondered if all babies will have that huge smile on there face like she did. Seeing all moms be happy to see there own children just makes my day.
I just love seeing moms cry tears of joy because they finally saw thee own child.
This is why I am hoping that you give me a chance to explore how to be a midwives nurse.
I just don't want to be behind schedule,and if I explore early I will be able to get a head start.
I want to grow up and be useful not useless.
There is not going to be a lot of people around to help but I am hoping to see every baby be safe.
In order for that to happen I need to be thought to be one of the best.
I searched up in the internet that there is many advance stuff to become a midwife nurse.
Like first there is a regular college student taking notes,then the masters degree,then there is the midwife nurse.
I am just hoping that I do well,and if i do something wrong please tell me. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
F99B20789DD7 | Dear Schoolboard,
I think that school should not be extended. students need to have a long break at home because they might have after school clubs to attend to.
I think students should not have extended school because they are not going to pay attention to the teacher they need to rest their brains for a long time since you are in school for 7 hours. Another reason why i think students should not have extra time at school is because kids have to wake up early and they are tired so they wont pay attention since they dont get enough sleep.
The other reason why i think school should not be extended is because the students most of them do not pay attention so typically the teacher is wasting her time trying to teach them. Also why i think they should not extend school is because if the day is longer they are going to need more breaks during the day and it takes a little long to go back in the building.
On the other hand i think they should have a extended school because they will know their subjects faster and that will make the school year faster. Another reason why i think they should extend school is because the students are really bored at home and they wish to learn instead of being home board. The last reason why
I think school should be extended is because kids might not pay attention during the day so with the extra hour they might want to pay attention and they will learn a little.
The last reason why i think school should be extended is because the students do things outside of home that are not good for them like doing challenges,steeling or getting into fights outside of school which can cause them injuries. The other reason i think they should extend school is because students would or will have a better education so that when they are grownups they will find a job that pays you more than the others.
These are the reasons why i think students should and should not have school extended i think they should extend school for a better education and i think they should not extend school because it is way too long | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
F99CE431D554 | Do you think a positive attitude is the key to success in life?
in this paragraph, i will say that I'm agree to have a positive attitude beacuse it's a good thing and important that people should have.
One reason why have a positive attitude, it's beacuse if you give a positive attitude to one person, that person will be nice to you, and you going to receive all the things that you want, and like you want to be, and that person going to give you back the same attitude to you, that means that if you give a positive attitude you goint to receive a positive attitude.
Another reason, is that people should always have a positive attutide to every single person, so the persons can be nice to you, and treat you like you want, and that can demostrate that you are a good person that have a possitive attitude.
Last reason, have a positive attitude always going to be a important and good thing, beacuse it's help you, that how can be nice to the people, and when you give a positive attitude to one person, and that person give back to you, it's feel good, beacuse they treat you very nice, they smile to you they ask how is going, that's the positive attitude.
in conclusion, have a positive attitude is the key to succes in life. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
F9BE4676CA35 | "All students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity."why? well because it helps you a lot in the future or now so the principal is right on letting every student do an extracurricular activity.
To me each student actually should participate in one or more activity. Because it helps you mentally and emotionally,and helps you get collage credits and be healthy. Many research has proven many reason why people should do at least one activity to help you benefit in life .Research has proven people who have done sports most likely wont have heart attacks or won't even have breathing problems or mostly any issues.
How it helps you benefit in staying fit or healthy or both is well playing a sport can really help you lose weight .help you be more active like for example playing baseball,basketball,track or even being a cheerleader and many other sports can help you a lot more then you think, because research has proven a lot that people who are more active are people who are benefiting from it a lot .
Another way it helps you is emotionally is because you get distracted and you dont think about the stuff that is stressing you all the time. you know you have a break from what is keeping you stressed because you are having fun. for example of having a way to distract yourself isn't just sports its working with other like helping out the councilor, helping out in making the yearbook, helping around in the school and not being just about you when your just thinking all about you well that is the problem. Instead of have all the students separated you can put all of the students each in different groups everyday that way people get to know each other and have fun .
collage credits also matter and playing a sport or just helping around the school would look amazing on a collage application . Extra activities would make a lot more collages be interested in you and most likely be interested in giving you a scholarship. You mostly get into a great collage because all the extra credit actually helps you get noticed by a lot of collages because they aren't just looking for people who have good grades they are looking for people who actually are more outstanding. Like grades are great, but how can you handle being nice . Have certain thing taken care of before anything . well how you take certain things serious because if you can't take your own high school classes seriously how are you going to take care of your classes in collage .Also collages are seeing how independent you are, and how well you do around others .
Having all the students do one or more extracurricular activity will benefit them so much of a lot of reasons why actually so you should try it out .Also because it doesn't hurt you to give it a try . I agree fully with the principal because not everything is a lot what you want you have to just go with it . | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
F9C298BF7CE5 | I agree with this prompt that positive attitude is the key to success because, with positive attitude it gets a person where they want to be in life. However with negative attitude you will never get anywhere at all, it will make a person lose confident, also would make you give up right there on the spot which means you gave up your a quitter. Then soon turn into a really bad habit that can't be stopped. Attitude is very important, and the way you use it can really affect the success that your trying to reach and to others ,its also very easy to just lose it all in less than a heart beat. I believe positive attuide is the key to success because it motivates a person to do good or better, spreads positvity to others who really need it,and makes you learn from your mistake because no one is perfect.
How can positive attitude motivate you to do good? well ya see when your having that energy that makes you believe you can do anything, or that anything is possible that's motivation for you to keep trying and embracing that positively well make a person stand out. By doing that it makes a person feel good about themselfs and motivates us to keeping that same energy. This is why it's important just by your attitude can have a huge impact on your success and how you use it is very important. By motivating your self, and others themselves will be motivated which is a really good thing. It's like your helping others out one of the first things to do to become successful , to help each other out and having a lot of patients is all in that positive attuide. This plays many key roles in the real world and will make a huge difference as well. An example, walking in for an interview being positive at all costs and respectful shows signs that your interested therefore you would have a possibility of getting hired and can go from there you will be a very successful person. I know everyone is successful in there own ways but there are limits and attitude plays a huge role in that.
spreading positively to others is another important topic because these people might not be doing so well but you can always help change that for a person. By boosting their confident to make them happy comes from positive attuide because in life, theres no time to be playing games there's very little time to accomplish your success before it's over and soon to be regretted. Also in encouraging others will make you extremely happy that right there will get you somewhere in the future and it will be good. most jobs in this life style today sometimes go based of skills and etc. But Mostly look into a great positive attitude, there are a lot of benefits to this in reality being skillful and useful. When something doesn't go as planned, keep trying bring that positive attitude forward never give up it's not too late to change. Taking a test and having it being extremely hard when given negative attuide you will fail and face the consequences but doing the opposite you would be much more relaxed,and will boost that confident up into keep trying because life is full of mistakes you have to push and keep trying now that's what being successful is almost about. Albert enstin did he give up? No right? and look at where hes at he became one of the most successful person ever same with Bill Gates and Mark Zurkrbuirg when you keep going you will see the results so keep pushing and one day I guarantee you will be a great role model or even better. Just remember always keep that positive attuide and keep trying think about the good and not bad and you will have the key to success.
learning from your mistakes is another key attuide to have, people have to understand that when you learn its OK to fail and get back up from it thats why you learn from them for a reason. Having positive attitude in life helps you grow as person to understand, and in the long run it will important. When doing so, you will just keep growing,and having good support from yourself or others. think about businesses to be in a business its all about that positive attuide and character that's what makes you learn from your mistakes and to keep growing. In a business there's a lot of up's and down's with negative attuide it will only make it worst but when your in the right state of mind there are choices to make that you might not like but it is part of life,in a business you need to support one another.
In conclusion having a positive attitude is the key success in life, without it how will you know what you've accomplished along the way. There are many ways to have a key to success but the most important one is having positive attitude. And this will benefit your life even more,attitude is energy and showing off the wrong kind of energy will be consequences and will not get anyone anywhere in life. This is very important for each an other it's not very hard to be positive you just have to be in the right state of mind. This shows how much attitude can really change things it shows how important this is. I believe positive attuide is the key to success because it motivates a person to do good or better, spreads positvity to others who really need it,and makes you learn from your mistake because no one is perfect. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
F9C96F25D515 | Spain is one of the most beautiful place in this world. Spain has lots of stuff, they have big soccer clubs like Real Madrid, Barcelona, Athletico Madrid, and many more. They have big stadiums that whole over 100,000 people, they even have some nice features like they have have restruants inside the stadium, one of them has a bedroom inside.
Once I would arrive at Spain I would love to try their food because I heard their food was good sou
I sesrched it up and the food looks so yummy and tasty. I would also love to ride on a boat and cruise through the city. One of the good things is that it's hot most of time over there.
Barcelona is a beautiful city in Spain, they speak Catalan. Most of Spanish people would only speak Spanish but with an accent but Barcelona speaks Spanish and Catalan. That would one the languages i would love to learn. Spain has alot of great cities like Generic_City, Generic_City, Generic_City, and a whole bunch more. They each have a stadium.
The last place I would love to visit is the capital of Spain which is good. Generic_City is one of the best soccer team in the world. They have a lot of great players and a Big stadium. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F9D0974B3AF7 | I disagree about extending school because,Parents might want to spend time with their kids after school on a regular day after school and if school was extended parent might have already gone to work by the time you get home. Parents might have done an appointment with a doctor right after a regular day at school,but if the time extended at school the doctor might have already closed. kids would want to get out of school to talk with their friends or have fun doing what they like best. The teachers might not get paid more then a normal day at school. Teachers should get paid more if school was extended. I would not like school to get extended because,I have more important things to do after school like taking care of my brother or take care of my dogs. My parents are never home and my older sister is. My parent tell me to help my sister clean the house after school but when i get home she never cleans until before my parents come, and if school was extended she would never clean the house and my parents would already be heading home. This is why i think school should not be extended. And the most important thing is that nobody wants to be in school. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F9DDE725DB74 | To begin with, it is good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college or the work force one year early?. In point of view, it is good idea because when students finish their high school in three years, they also can work, and save money to enter college. So it's good for students graduate in three years and obtain their diploma, and start to apply in some college. Also, students can find better jobs with their diploma.
First, it is good idea for students graduate and obtain their diploma because some students need the diploma to enter college. For example, my friend Generic_Name needed her diploma and start to apply in summer to enter at the
Hampton University. Furthermore, students who's want to achieve their diploma in three yaers, they have to work hard. But some students wants to achieve their goals without make any kind of effort.
Second, students can find better jobs with their diploma because if you don't have any diploma you cannot work in a proffessional job where people pay more. For example, my sister Generic_Name have to work after she graduate from from high school, but she need a good job to save money to enter one year later at college and pay her first semester. Instead, some students have to work because they don't have any type of help from their families.
If students have to work is because they want to enter college.
Third, some students cannot finish their high becuase they have to work for maintain themself. For example, my cousin Generic_Name cannot finish his studies because he have to work at 3:00 pm to 10:00 pm so he don't have time to his asignments of high school. Some students can't graduate not because they don't want to, cause they have to pay bills from their homes. Also, they don't have a better job to pay their studies from college and its harder to them to obtain the diploma from high school.
In conclusion, it is good idea for students finish their high school in three years and enter to college. So it's good for students graduate in three years and obtain their diploma. So students can find better jobs with their diploma and pay their studies from college. But, students can't graduate not because they don't want to, cause they have to work and pay bills from their homes. Also, when students have a positive main they can achieve whethever they want, it doesn't matter the situation that you live you can finish your high school and enter college if you work hard. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
F9E1434B2151 | Throughout the course of our history,education has always been placed amongst the most important necessities,as it not only helps us learn and better ourselves,but because it also opens new doors and possibilities for us. In the past,schools couldn't offer differing alternatives,because technology wasn't as present as it is today. Schools can now offer education to students,all while being at different locations. By students taking classes at home,they'll be able to benefit because they won't feel as socially distressed as they would in person,the level of education could be better and possibly help them graduate earlier,and they wont't have to endure social issues, such as bullying. Many people tend to believe that because they go to school,they won't have a hard time adjusting and fitting in with the masses,but to contrary beliefs,there's a lot of people who do struggle with social anxiety and overall,tend to have a hard time fitting in. Firstly,an example of this, is my cousin Generic_Name. He does have friends,but he feels extremely overwhelmed by being around so many different people,mostly because he's always struggled with social anxiety. Generic_Name decided that he would still like to pursue and attain his education,so he started looking for different alternatives that could help him do so. After much research and gathering of information,he concluded that distance learning was the best choice for him,as he wouldn't have to endure overwhelming amounts of people,or feel pressured by the constant necessity of having to wake up early during the mornings. Another example would be my friend Generic_Name,who never really had problems of fitting in and making friends,but overall disliked the whole ordeal of the school system itself. She then decided to pursue her education through another medium,that medium being,distance learning. Secondly,what a majority of people don't tend to realize,is the fact that you could achieve a better education,and even graduate at an earlier rate. This is another benefit of distance learning. Many people tend to believe that attending school,actually decreases their chances of being able to graduate early and of becoming more independent from their families at a younger age. Many individuals throughout the course of the world,utilize distance learning because they would like to achieve their educations at a faster pace,than those who are enrolled in schools. A prime example of this,is my friend Generic_Name. He was an excellent student while at school,but he wanted to find a way of being able to take advanced courses,that not only prepared him for college and provided him with advanced credits,but also helped him graduate at an earlier age. Generic_Name is now a professional,with a degree in marine biology. He achieved these accomplishments,all at the young age of 25. Another example would be my other friend,Generic_Name. She had always excelled at school,but she wanted an alternative that provided her with a better education and a chance of being able to enroll into college at a younger age. After much thought and consideration,and much conversation with her family and peers,she ultimately decided that distance learning was the best choice. As of now,Generic_Name has graduated at the young age of 17,and is estimated to graduate out of college at the young age of 19. Finally, an issue,that as of now,still affects many schools around the world,is bullying. Bullying has been an issue that has always caused concern amongst the masses,and sadly,it's an issue that is still ongoing till this day. Among the many issues that affect public schools throughout the whole world,bullying is still one of the most commonly and frequently mentioned. Despite the benefits of not feeling pressured,being able to pursue a better education and graduating at an early age,distance learning is also an alternative that many people, who've unfortunately been victims of bullying,provides them an opportunity of being able to continue with their studies,and a feeling that they are no longer exposed to issues,such as bullying. An example of this,is my friend Generic_Name. During his first couple of years in high school,he was brutally mocked for always standing out amongst his peers,and he not only felt massively insecure, but he also developed many social problems and insecurities. He had tried many alterning ways of possibly pursuing an education without having to worry about being mocked,until he finally discovered distance learning. He discovered,that he could still attend his classes and carry on with his regular school activities,all while being at the comfort of his very own home. Luckily for Generic_Name,his bullies actually turned out to be massively underachieving,so much so,that they ended up being expelled from school. He then decided to return to school,and luckily for him,he started to fit in. If it wasn't for distance learning,Generic_Name wouldn't have graduated his freshman year,or his sophomore year. People shouldn't really be afraid of trying alternatives that differ from the norm,they should always read and educate themselves on the pros and cons of distance learning. As technology continues to expand beyond realms we could've ever have possibly imagined,the future of education could one day narrow down to distance learning. | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 |
F9FEE5DC1640 | Imagination and knowledge are all come from you mine, but what are the different between those two? Scientist Albert Einstein said, "Imagination is more important than knowledge." I'm agree with him, because if you take a class like art or computer graphs, you don't really need your knowledge, the most important thing you need, is your imagination. It can help you do better in the class.
first, the different between Imagination and knowledge is you don't need to rember the knowledge, and sometimes people have hard time to remberm. So you just need to think you like to do, and you don't need to follow the knowledge what you learn. I'm that kind of person that don't like to rember things, but I like to do what in my mine want to do. We have a lot knowledge need to learn, and we never finished learning, but we can use our imagination to do more things that is helpful to the world.
I guess, everybody like to play video games, but do you know how they make the games up? I did create app club this fall, first I thought we will create some app what other people already create it before, but than the teacher told us that, everybody will be create in they are own app, I don't know what kind of app I want to create, and told the teacher said, "can I create a one somebody just create it before?" "No, you can't, you need to be imagination, just think of what you want to do, and what kind of app you like." She answer. the end of the due day, I use my imagination to create a game app. From this class I learn that imagination is more important than knowledge.
Imagination and knowledge are both important, but imagination is a little better than knowledge, we can use our imagination to do more helpful things to our beautiful world. In our life we have too much knowledge need to learn, we need to keep learning and nerve stop. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
FA0619D6A0DF | People may not agree, but we do pick our own character trait. There are also other people who when it gets to having their own character traits they can't, therefore they get influence by others. Yes, we probably were influenced by other, but we didn't use all their character traits. There's lots of people who try to be others but it always dose not work out. If you want to pop out like the others best chance is you being your true self.
To begin with, we've been creating our own character traits since birth. We all learned how to speak, and walk differently. Your first word were most likely "Dada", or "mama". You kept watching shows that kept you entertain, or was it the games that made it entertaining that kept you going. How'd you learn how to walk, were you thought by your parents, or did you learn by yourself. it was either your parents were walking you, or you stood up and took your first steps.
In addition, you never stay young, you're always growing, our parents always wish we wouldnt grow. But it's part of life, now you're in the stage where time gets hard. Being a teen is mixed emotions, as like mentally, and physically. Times gets rough, you're struggling in school, or at home. You're having problems with friends, or family members. Being a teen is never a struggle nor negativity. You're learning what you need to improve and what you don't, you're helping yourself out. Guide yourself and continue making new character traits.
Finally, you see everything different, there's more responsibility, more weight to your shudders. your an adult, getting ready to pay bills and more. you've came a long way, youve been through ups and down. You've learn so much, use your knowledge, and continue to expand it. Do what's best for you and not for others. Use your character traits that you've learn and explore whats in front of you.
You are who you are, you choose how you live, how you move, and how life will be. Yes there are struggle in life but it doesn't mean stop and dont expand. have your character traits to help you, to guide you. Yet we're in a new year where people try to be other people, people try to be who they aren't. It's better to be yourself, than being fake to yourself. all these character traits that you've made, you worked, you used. It defines who you are and what you can do in life. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
FA078892658B | It is true that keeping teenagers out of trouble is important for many reasons. If regulations that require teenagers to be off the streets after 10 pm are adopted then they will help teenagers academically, socially, medically and economically.
The first reasons that proves that these curfews will help teenagers and keep them out of trouble is that if teenagers are not allowed to be on the streets in the middle of the night , then they will get more sleep and will learn more efficiently when they are school. For example, if a teenager is not allowed to be on the street during the middle of the night, then that individual will get a good night of sleep and will be able to stay awake during classes. Also, if this regulations are are adopted, then they will require teenagers to stay at home longer, which will help them because they will have more time to work on their homework and if they do their homework then they will improve their grades. Furthermore, these curfews will help teenagers improve their learning skills and will also help them rest more and get their grades up.
The second reason that shows why these curfews must be adopted is the one that will allow teenagers to socialize better. For example, if teenagers are in the streets in the middle of the night, then people will not want to be close to them because they might think that they are bad people and that they are probably involved in gangs, so they will be scared of them. Many people will agree that it is better if teenagers stay at their houses during night hours because if they stay at their homes doing good things, then they will make more friend, socialize and communicate better with people because no one will be afraid of them and no one will think that they are involved in some criminal group. So, if teenagers keep themselves out of the street during the night, then they will be able to make friends, communicate better and basically socialize in a better way in which no one will try to avoid them.
The third reason that proves that these curfews must be adopted is the medical reason. If teenagers are in the streets during the night, then they have the possibility of getting in fight and ending up with injuries. For example if a teenager is out during late night hours, then others might think that he or she is there because he's a bad person and then they might get into a fight in which someone could get hurt and end up in the hospital. These curfews will prevent teenagers from getting into fights and from having to go to the hospital when they can just stay at home and be safe.
The last reason that will keep teenagers out of trouble and will help them is the economic reason. For example, if a teenager wants to be out in the middle of the night, then that individual can find himself or herself a job that will allow him or her to work during night hours, keep him or her out of the streets and help him or her economically. Economically means that the person will be working, earning money and also staying out of his or her house during late night hours. Teenagers can improve themselves economically if they spend their time working instead of spending it in the street doing things that will not help them in anyway. Finally, by working and improving their economy teenagers will be able to save some money for their own future and have money available for emergencies that can occur throughout their lives.
Furthermore, it is better that these curfews are adopted for the security of teenagers. Also because these regulations will help teens improve themselves economically by keeping them out of the streets and motivating them to find a job if they want to be out of their house during late night hours, they will also help them socially because people will not be avoiding them if they are not seen in the street, medically because they will prevent them from getting into fights and having to go to the hospital and finally academically because teenagers will not be wasting time on the streets and they will have more time to do their homework and improve their grades at school. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
FA08CD5A2E48 | Sometimes when you are not doing anything or just do not do something physical, some good or great things could happen surrounding you and the world.
My first idea that makes inactivity a "self work" in progress. Meaing letting people around help you instead of you doing everything yourself. A movie called "Christopher Robin" shows that as a child, Christopher did things before but he had imaginary animals helping him.
The purpose of the movie, is to give the auidience the understanding of what it means to be always doing something, always occupy yourself with the simplest things that you do not really have to do. And adding pressure on yourself. Than letting others help you, can create good things surrounding you and you can have good thoughts. Because when you are stressed you are worried about how things will be in the future. Having people help you can still have great success that can be accomplished.
The example or message in this movie shows when Christopher is an adult and he pre-occupys himself a lot, the more problems is caused with his life. He almost lost his wife and daughter because he was always occupied doing his business job. Later when he realizes he was on the wrong track, his friend, pooh was telling him he is not the same as himself before. He told himself the only way he'll be less stressed and worried is to become the child inside him and bloom once more. Letting your inside child out, he needs to find himself doing absolutely nothing, no stress, and just spend time with the life he has been given and his family. After doing that, he was more gifted than before, like this idea he had for how to make his business better but had never presented because he was always doing something
Like the thesis was talking about not doing something physical could lead to some good or great things, Christopher found himself at the end. He is happy and relaxed with what he accomplished when he let go and did nothing. Now he realizes the result of doing nothing and how different it would have been if he kept on occupying himself in things he should not be worried about rather than enjoying what he has to thank for. So the key is that if Christopher Robin can accomplish great or good things by doing nothing rather than doing something, then that means everybody else can learn as well the understanding to find success and move ahead. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
FA0A1D6FEE25 | I agree with Ralph Waldo's quote " To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you somthing else is the greatest accmplishment. In todays society everyone wants to be part of the wave to whatever is popular. People always go the extra mile to impress other people even if they have to change their style or the way they act. It's hard to be yourself in todays society so those who can do it have accmplished something great. Being yourself is better because then you'll find your real friends.
Students in Middle School and High School for whatever reason want to be cool. They think doing drugs, breaking rules and being disrespectful to others is cool. When they get home they're a different person. They're respectful, follow all the rules and don't do drugs because thats the way they are raised, They're being themselves. That shows the impact of what people consider being cool is.
Some students are at the wrong spot at the wrong time and start hanging out with the wrong group of people to be cool. This is important because they could be offered drugs or be offered to skip class. The students would say yes because they want to be cool knowing very well never to do it. This shows what could happen to a student who are trying to be cool. when they know to stay in school and never do drugs because that won't help your education it would only slow it down.
For example one of my friends was skipping school and doing lots of things he wasn't supposed to be doing. He thought he was cool and told everyone. I guess you could say he got cool from it but in the long run he suffered. This is important because while him trying to be cool he ended up getting bad grades and getting kicked out of school. The school gave him one more chance and made him go to the carrer center where students who fail usually go. This shows what could happen when you try to be cool.
Being yourself is the best thing you can accomplish because you wouldn't worry about most things other students wear or say. You would go further in life being yourself and becoming something you want to become. If your don't want to become a doctor and want to be a car machanic then that what you do. Being yourself would make you more happy then trying to fit in. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
FA0A22FE957A | Summer vacation is for enjoyment. Every student is waiting for it. Students need long break to make his/her mind better. In vacation many students go for a trip with family or with friends. In school days students are waiting for vacation but when they have vacation they miss there school friends. Students need break for 4 to 5 weeks to enjoy there vacation.
Some educators students feel that the summer break is too long and they think when they return to school they cannot catch up easily. They said we have a holiday in year-round means only 1 times in a year. It should be only for 3 to 4 weeks as long as a winter break.
I did not agree with the educators students because students have aslo there life. Ther need to enjoy it make a fun and they also have dreams for their life. Educators students cannot decided others life. If they needs short break then they after 3 to 4 weeks they start study at home and fweel like they are doing their school works. Educators did not like long break because in schoolthey always study and at home also. Long break for educators student is like a death. Educators student cannot enjoy their vacation properly because they alway think about there study. I think in vacations all students cannot think about the study. They need to enjoy their vacation . Educators students also have their life and they need to enjoy it properly had a fun, spend time with with famil or friends. Go gor a long trip and refresh there mind. After all that they can start from begining for their study. They get better ideas for study. They study properly without tension.
I suggest educators students and normal students go togather because educators students also have an idea how to enjoy it make it fun and where they want to go. In summer vacation students may go beach, park, sunshine point and enjoy it. In summer vacation students may enjoy ever single movement because it can be there memories.
After then they finish there schools they can missed tht evey single movement that they had a lot of fun on it. They miss theirfiends whom they enjoy. They miss there school. But after their schools they cannot meetv their friends easily because all friends may go somewhere else for their study and for their best future.
So coclusion is every student enjoy the break. Do lot of fun with friends. | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
FA11AB7CD13F | Technology
The application of science in Indus- try or commerce. The methods and materials thus used technology. I agree that technology has negative effects on people's lives. Technology is hurtful for all the people. For reason person learn how to get dope for the technology. Examples they used the internet to know how to get the dope from, and dope is be come unfavorable for a person. Like the person come be so wired to anyone because he doesn't know what he's doing. He be come a incorrigible person with anyone try to stop him.
The people don't have to go to another one house. They just use the phone to call them and ask if they don't good. Because of the technology we don't have to see each other. They think it's enough to talk in the phone or call each other video call. Before the technology everyone used to go see their family at home. Also they can go to the store and buy everything they want. After the technology they order everything online. When you play a games you don't talk to the other person that play with you.
I think technology let you be come a unfavorable person. Reason we use technology for anything. Example you don't have to go to the bank to pay your credit bill you can sit and home and do it. You don't have to hold you debit card with you guess why because you can open it on your phone. Technology makes everything silly. Also you can pay your house bill when you sit at home.
Technology has a positive effects too. For reason I can call my friends in Generic_City with my phone. I don't have to write a litter for them and send it to Generic_City. If someone sick and you don't have time to go visit her just call her, and ask if she's feel better at that time. Technology also can help you to make a new friends for any country.
Technology is positive because when I came to USA I didn't speak English at the time. So when I went to school it was so hard for me to understand what are the people talking about. One teacher used Google translate to try to speak to me. That was nice of her she's tried to help me to understand what's going on in the class. She told to me to watch TV in English to try to learn how to speak, But to was hard for me because when I came to USA I was to old; and I was already speak one laughed. I know that I took a long time to learn English but finally now I know how to speak English also I can understand my teachers when they ask me about my homework. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
FA130BF0072E | Technology is very important in the human community because if Ur writing it down on Ur phone and you can just put reminder when you will have to do something important like go on a picnic or go out with the family,have a business trip. In the society people just wanna find something fast and easy they dont wanna look up a word on a book it takes to long and they can just look it up on they're devices and there done. Its awful that people do communicate to each other anymore its just threw texts and that is horrible its not professional. and playing games every day or on devices is a bad thing and good in the same time. But i do not agree with that with prompt devices are bad because its like a drug you dont wanna get off Ur phone , laptop you just wanna be there on there everyday and not doing anything active. You can get sick if your always on ur devices just watching the screen for hours so its bad. When i got my first phone i was always on my phone non stop just texting watching videos i wouldnt stop all i would want would be all my devices i wouldnt sleep i would go to sleep around four in the morning. Yeah you can have Ur devices but you cant get addict to all of that because your going to fall apart and be mislabel. And when you are not on ur device your going to feel empty without it your going to be lost and ur going to say to yourself what can i do to be happy again. You can start off not needing any devices because ur device its a want you do not need it in ur life it can be important to call family and friends but you dont need it. you can go workout and forget all about ur devices i dont need my phone i just want it to text people and listen to music. I find all devices in a negative way it can change ur mind mentally emotionally and physically let say you at home relaxing and ur just eating and eating and ur on phone not getting up ur going to gain weight and for some they can get anxiety or depression because all they know is just do be on there devices not doing anything else. i got anxiety for being on my phone for too long staying up and having no sleep and sleeping is very important for students that have to go to school and do there work yes you can have your phone and do a timer how long you can use it for. so my option devices are bad people have there phones up in there face people have accidents walking and using there devices a car can run them over or they can run somebody over texting and driving is a big issue you can get a big text and go to jail if you hit somebody with ur car. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
FA145FA7B678 | Think abou the benefits of working with a group or workin alone. The people think working in gruop you have more benefits. Working in gruop is more better because that more people thinking idea's of to the work. The peoplo think is more good working in group because you have more idea "Which work alone". Working in group you has benefits because tha's more person thinking idea's , and writing.
Meanwhile you work alone because you think more , and work more an strong more your mind. I preference, work in group tha's why you has more benefits. The people tink is more better work in group why is more easy which work alone. The socioenomic class consisting of people who work for wages esp. Low wages , including unskilled and semiskilled laborers and their group. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
FA2DE7E82907 | It's has been saying people learn from their mistakes in order to accomplish a goal. Keep those mistakes out make them less likely to build self-esteem. True self-esteem come from achievement because is better point the mistakes in order to success.
Point the errors keep student away to avoid do it next time, for example if a junior student is about to take the SAT exam ; he decide to practice math problems .His math teacher decide to check his work, and he think praise his work is good because make him feel less worried about the exam, but the truth is making feel better is not helpful because he is not gonna get enough knowledge about his problems. I could say he is going to feel much better with a high score in his exam.
Lower the possibility to gain knowledge because the student in some point would have to use their knowledge it could be in college, at their job, and home. Like in my sophomore year I had a English teacher who praise most of my work because she thought that would in increase my knowledge, but was the opposite I felt like I was going backward instead of forward. I found praising a student work make them learn less in the way if they have something wrong students would have to look for answer, so that mean if they find what they did wrong is a chance of increase their knowledge because they might find more than just the answer that they are looking for.
Student learn for their mistakes it's much better point those mistakes out than hide it form them. Eventually student that don't show improvement are the ones that the teacher decide hide their errors because it's better clear the doubt. Like a kindergarten student they asked a lot of question to the teacher, and most of the time the teacher correct their work to let them know what did they do wrong to improve their work. It would not make sense that the teacher tell to the all student that they know all the alphabet just to make them feel better, so the students could stop learning and focus in other activities like math, social studies, or even play. Praising is not good as we thought because can make us be okay with our work, and not encourage us to learn.
while some may say praise student work could keep the working to make them improve and build self-esteem, actually student learn form their mistakes, and it's better point it out than hide it from them because an error doesn't mean failure meant the student is improving to success. with the success comes the self-esteem. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
FA314E23647E | One of the most famous quote of winston churchil is, " success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". some people think they should no loss enthusiasm, because if they failure without loss enthusiasm one day they can be success this is like, if i failure i dont want to give up i need to have enthusiasm to keep going. I believe they should never loss enthusiasm, because one day they can be success,learn how to no give up, and that can help you with your goals.
First, i should no loss enthusiasm, because all people have failure, but if you never loss enthusiasm one day you can be success in my life i had failure,but i never give up, becuase i know one day i going to became something better. when i come to united state was hard for me for the lenguage, and learn different things, but the most difficulty in high school was to learn english, but i never loss my entthusiasm, and now i'm about to see everthing that i have done, becuase this year is my graduation.
Second reason, is the people can learn how to no give up, becuase if you have failure thas how you learn that you need enthusiasm to keep going everyone would have failure in their life,but as i'm telling you keep going one day you would see why you have try hard,but you always have to failure first, and then you learn have to no loss your enthusiasm.
The final reason is, that can help you olot in the future with your goals, and you can be success in my oppinion people dont like to failure, and they give up. I telling you that sometime i give up,because life is hard you can failure and give up, but never loss your enthusiasm, becuase that is the most important thing to be success, and that can help you with your goals. You have to has the enthusiasm to be something better, and make good choices
As you have read you see that this is important, some people thing that they can not do it, but everyone can do it you always need to have enthusiasm for everythings to be success i agree becuase thats how my life go, but i always have enthusiasm to be success this is very important, becuase this can hel you in the future to be something better never give up becuase things better are about to come. | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
FA38957FCAF6 | i have the talent of draw, i can use it in the art class whit the, in a personal draw, to describe things with a person with draw and to make comics. I like draw because that relaxe me, i like draw because i like to see colors, figures, i like to use my imagination. When i was a children i likes draw dogs, cats, mountains and houses. Now i like draw anime, realistic draws with color or black and wite. I don't konw how, but i won a draw concurse in my old school in Generic_City.
I like when other people tell me my draw it's good because everytime i make mi best try, i know i don't speak perfectly english, but now i make my best try and i guess that is correct.
i like to read comics because the pictures call my atenttion, i can't draw anywhere, i need my room with draw, i don't pay atenttion with my draw when i | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
FA3D872358BF | Although some people don't like using technology it's a good thing because thanks to technology we can now talk with family members who live far away and also you can meet lots of new friends on the internet. But i get some people are afraid to talk to new people because they don't know about the person their meeting with but once they meet the person they talk about what the person life is like. But technology is taking over the world because for example stores are getting shut down because you can now buy anything on the internet there's no point of having stores everyone now uses amazon or eBay to stuff that you would find in Walmart. And a lot of stores are already out of business like Kmart because stuff you would find at Kmart are on amazon or eBay. Cars can be bought online you don't need to go to the dealer ship you now just get your computer and look for the you want and they can deliver the car right to your house .Also we have Tesla which are cars that are electric and you charge them instead of putting gas in them and also they this feature called Autopilot which means the cars drives by it's self and all you have to do is pull that switch on and then just have your hands on the steering wheel for safety reasons but they are trying to make it where you only have pull the switch and just look out the window also they are very fast it can beat a Lamborghini and when you brake you are charging the battery .But also people are losing their jobs because of this but they can also work using technology instead of working at a store they work at a Amazon factory plus they pay very well .So what do I think of technology I think it's awesome because it gives you new opportunity's that we use to not have when technology did not exist. And it's changing not only the world but also the universe because we have technology everywhere like in the moon we sent a Tesla Roadster and we also have satellites in the sky that tell us what happening in the sky. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
FA43581AD6D1 | Thomas Jefferson once wrote "determine never be idle, it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing.". I completely agree with this statement because if you do not want to do anything then how are you sure it will happen. If I want money and I do not have a job then how will I ever get money.
If you want a job and you only sit on your couch how will you get a job? The anwser to that question is you wont because you are not going out and applying for a job. You have to be active and you have to always keep looking until you have the job you want. Nobody will come to you and tell you
"Do you want this job?". You have to get it and if you are not doing anything to get it nobody will. In todays society people do not want to be active in what they want to get, they want everying to be givin to them. How can we give people something they did not work for they need to be active and search for what they want to get it.
People may disagree with my statement and say "You do not need to be active for things to be done or to get a job.". If you are not active then how do you know things will come your way. Everything you get in life is earned through being active and getting things done nothing comes at a snap of your fingers. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
FA4D2DB3B9EA | Solution, learning, and smart are three words that describe why knowledge is more important than creativity. Knowledge is more important than creativity because with knowledge people will do better at school, they will get a job easily, and if there is a problem they will find a solution.
Knowledge is more important than creativity because with knowledge people will do better at school. The students will do better on test and quiz. If they get good grade on test and quiz they will have a better GPA. They will get smarter. If they get smarter they will learn faster. They will have good grades. If they have good grades they will get a good job later in their lives. Creativity is less important than knowledge because knowledge will help in life.
Knowledge is more important than creativity because people will get a job easily. They will know where to search. If they know where to search they will waste less time. They will make a good impression. If they know a lot about the job they will make a good impression. People will have more chance to get hire. If they already know a lot about the job they want they will have more chance to get hire.
Knowledge is more important than creativity because knowledge will help to get a job
Knowledge is more important than creativity because if there is a problem people will find a solution. If there is a problem at work they will find how to fix it. If they find how to fix it they will have a chance to not get fired. When there is a problem with a friend people always fix it. If the problem is fixed everything comes back to normal. If there is a family problem someone will manage to fix it. When everything is fix everything is going back to normal. Knowledge is more important than creativity because knowledge will help to find solution.
Doing better at school, getting a job easily, and finding solution to problems are way that knowledge is more important than creativity. Without knowledge humans will not be able to do anything. Knowledge will always help to get a job, to find solutions, and will help at school. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
FA55AEEF8F9C | Alot of people use cell phones In classrooms which I think It's a good Idea. Cellphones are use for emergencies and educational purposes. In my opinion students sometimes are given alot of work, where they have to find Information on their textbooks, or dictionary that takes almost half of the class. when they can just look it up on their phone and take about 10 to 15 minutes. Another thing is to think about are that students sometimes forget their homeworks at home and is worth half of your grade. and by having their phones with them, they can called their parents and asked them to drop up their homework at school. cellphones should be allowed in classrooms, students would be less stressed about school. They won't have to worry about carrying a heavy textbook, when they can just do their work on their cellphones. which it means, more work done and less time wasted on going page to page looking for the right answers.
Now let's talk about having a cell phone In classrooms In case of an emergnecy. One reason I believed they should allowed cellphones In classrooms because In case of a lockdown. If a student sees the person, but the police does not know how he looks like or has no idea where his at. the student can call 911 and give details of the suspect. In addition to my other reason, Students should be allowed to have their cellphone In case of an emergency call. what If something happens at home. For example, A students sibbling gets sick and doesn't stop crying until he sees one of his family. So the babysitter calls his parents, but his parents can't do anything because they can't leave work or they'll get fired. The parents would have to call the student, now the student have to leave school and take care of his sibbling.
In conclusion, I see no reason why students shouldn't be allowed to use cellphones In classrooms. schools would be more easier and safetier. you may never know what could happen and a cellphone can be a huge impact. It can save someone's life. so I think student's should be allowed to have cellphones In classrooms. sometimes students read a whole book and they dont understand it so they stop doing their work. while you can use your phone and find all the things and learn instead of reading a whole book and find most of the things you were looking for but not learning at all. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
FA568C27F0F5 | The some businesses adopted work for ten hours for a week that will good for the worked, because they make more money for example they are working 10 hours a day they are consisting going to work but the school dont follow this model, because the student dont are coming to school everyday.,
The school dont follow this model from the businesses work. First the student are not coming to school everyday and they need to come for learn because the businesses for work are taking all the time, and just came to school for two day and they are missing all they work from the school. Also the student need to came to school for learn and be a good person and them they can work after school.
Ruler the school dont want the student just came for two day. Because one of disadvantages is they are not going to make a great grade . Second because the students are not coming school, and they dont know what the teachers are began doing during class with the other student and they will have a bad grade for not coming and dont doing the work for the classes.
One of benefits they have began work is making money. Because they are working, four-day for a week so that make they have a good time to work and make ten hours a day but they are just going to work and not come to school. Another way they can work is after school that help they to came to school and learn, have a good grades and all the classes. Next they will be respect to the teachers and do all the homeworks pay attencion in class when the techaers are teaching.
Conclusion: the school and the teachers want all the students can graduates and be a good person have a good job and they want to help every students to have a good future, and the student need to come to school everyday so that how we can learn, and student can work after school..
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FA5998D50575 | Do you are agree or desagree school cafeteria plans to change to a new, healthier school lunch menu ?
The school cafeteria would to make a new plans healthier school lunch menu.
some students from Generic_School don't take their foods or drinks,property to healthy problems. For example: From 99.9% students a 10% of students present allergic problems to some foods, like chicken,milk and maiz. Also too the type cooked from this food. Some students want to their food middle well or meddle. The students today they're wants to express, the that their body's need to feelt a mayor comfortybility inside of the school, but to the sometime the students parents knowing the type of food that their children eating feelt them safed with their children.
The importance of have a healthy body. Many students don't want to eat more calories that their bady's to need the reason is simple,They thinking that will be people with obesity problems. It's true because from 99.9% students a 8% has obisity problems and a 15% has physiology problems,they feeling fraid. Why? Because existence three reason's that's why they want to change menu cafeteria. Example number 1: The foods came with many oil and some students don't like it, the type of foods with bad aspect. Example number 2:They want to foods that will be slowly for their stomach. Example number 3: They need to know, the process of how were cooked the food.
The focuse from the students in their class room. The good nutricion is the basis to a very good focuse to dependen in the shape, in that our food is made and the most important the menu, all students said we are bored of the same menu. We want to something new. Are 4 school year's into. We ate because, we don't have the opportunity to express and to change the menu. Our mood dependen in how our body felt and that dependen, how they cooked?, what proccess has our food? Those were the questions and the opnions from 40% of students. We want to something slow to digest, some students don't like it beff their body need to happy. to that they can focuse in their class. They want to legunbres, potatos, and salad.
The school cafeteria would to make a new plans healthier school lunch menu. Because some students don't take food or drink, properly to healthy problems,for example: From 99.9% of students a 10% of students,present allergic problems to some foods, like chicken,milk, and maiz. The type cooked from this food. Nevertheless students parents want to knowing the type of food their children eating to that them feelt safed with their children. Also too the importance of have a healthy body. Many students don't want to eat more calories that their body needs. The reason is because from 99.9% of students a 8% of has obesity problems and a 15% has physiology problems,they feeling fraid. Why? Because the food came with many oil and some students don't like it foods with bad aspect, they want to food that will be slowly for their stomach, they need to know, the proccess of how the food, where were was cooked. However the good nutrucion is the basis to a very good focuse to dependen in the shape, in that our food was made.
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FA5BCD4CBF5A | Science Experiment
Why science is a enjoyable and educational activity?
An enjoyable educational activity is science experiment because you learn you things. This are reasons why science is a enjoyable and educational activity.
Having a scholarship in science its really helpful because the get to pay you're college, Bring more opportunities i you're life.
Science is a fun and easy subject because you are capable of learn new things and have to do with a lot of experiment.
Experiment is an action or procedure designed to discover, test, or illustrate something as a hypothesis or principle.
Science is a branch of knowledge such as chemistry, physics, and biology. Chemistry is science that deals with the composition and properties of substances and the change that take place when they react with other substances. Biology is science of living organisms. its has two major divisions that include zoology, the study of animals and botany, the study of plants. Physics is a science concerned with matter and energy.
Science experiment can lead you to a been a scientist. Been a scientist is a job that can guide you everywhere you go. A scientist is a person who is highly skilled or knowledge in science, especially in the area of natural science. Scientist is also a person the study science or predict things of nature and others thing like bones and e. c.t. The are different study of science Zoology, Botany and e. c.t. Science can be use in life.
This why science is an enjoyable and educational activity.
My all point of view is science can lead you into all this stuff. So this is why science experiments is enjoyable and educational. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
FA63EE28501A | Does true self-esteem come from praises or does it come from achievement? It's come from earning achievement, There's only so much praises can do if they aren't earning anything. Therefore the harder they work,the more they achieve. their self-esteem will keep rising and then they start believing in themselves more.
Also other believe that praises for deficient work undermines learning by lowering standards. I agree with there opinion,I believe that there should be goals to reach and you must try your hardest to achieve. Their's always the chance the chance of failing but that just means to keep pushing, to fix the mistakes. And when you finally achieve your goal it makes you feel so much better about yourself. Also that builds you up for harder task.
Therefore some believe that the source of true self-esteem is achievement. which I believe in too,feeling better about yourself works more when you have earned something. Also it can be anything but as long you give it your all,and achieve what is meant to be achieve. Your self-esteem is going to be built up knowing that you achieve something.
Next I don't believe in just praising someone no matter how good the job was works like that. Because you keep praising that they could do so much better on,it's just going to make the feel like they already got the job done,when they can do so much better. Praise their work when they tired there hardest,so then they can keep trying there hardest to achieve goals no matter what. That's how i believe that praising should be done and how to build self-esteem to make whoever try to best on anything, to not give just half but to give there all.
Finally does true self-esteem come from praise or does it come from achievement? It's come from earning achievement,so they know they give it everything they had to earn that achievement. praises work when you praise there best work so they can keep on trying there best on everything. It's takes them believing in themselves so they can earn achievement to build their self-esteem. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
FA72E7D170D5 | You never try to do something by yourself unless what you have already mastered, you will not grow all the time. You just will like a child and never grow up. Are you do something without any mastered? Even you are a young child, but you cannot always ask you parents and said " Mom (Dad) , i don't know how to do this one, i don't know how to do that one." And let your parents to do all of something for you. You never try, and you will never grow.
You are not a baby, you have to try to do something by yourself. When i was a child, do not understand what is "do you own thing by yourself ?'' My sister (older than me) ,she always told me '' help me to wash the dishes; help me to hang up the clothes...''
She never will do this a little thing. Have once time , my grandmother saw me and asked me '' what are you doing over here, is too dangerous. Come over here, quickly." '' Who let you to hang up the clother ?'' My grandmother said. I decrease my noice, and told her : '' is Generic_Name.'' Then my grandmom was angery,and told my sister :'' Why are you is so lazy, you can do al of this thing by yourself.'' Then, my sister, she was cry very lough.
If you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you are not be a success person and grow in your life. You have a big, samrt brain. In my memory, i am a lazy person. I do not know how to do that thing, but i do not want to think about how to do that, i will go to ask my parents or my sister.
The people in the world, they should have a little mastered when they do something else. A little mastered for every things, you will half of success.
No people is very perfect in the world, only when you want to do better than last time. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
FA87416EF173 | do you thing stuudent would benefit from being able to attend classes from hom?
I sopport the student should be attend class from home because We do not have to go to School and we can have more time with the family also We do not have to wake up early we can saty safe at home.
SD 1. some student do not like to wake up early and they shoose to take the classes online for the reason that student do not to ride the bus and can early to School.
SD 2. In my opinio it is a good idea to take class online most in this time becacuse so many bad thing are happen in the world for Example the corona virus this is one of most reason that I support to attend class at home because We can do the classes online and we can stay at home more safe and healthy.
SD 3. other good reason that is a good idea to take classes in home is that you mom know that you are in home because a lot of students scape and they mom thing that they are inthe School so if peolple attend classes from home mom ready know the his son in home.
conclution some student do not like to use the computer and they shoose to come to School and other student they do not how to use computer but still doing a good idea tke classes at home becasue you can have more time with your family also you don't have to wake up early to ride the bus and you can do you work at home and take more break | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
FA9386DCB8DD | Imagine going to a country full of beautiful places to go to. A lot of new technology to look at or to observe. That is why the one place I want to visit is Generic_City because it has a lot of beautiful places to visit and they have a lot of new technology.
Generic_City has great places to visit. The first place I want to see is the sky buildings. The sky buildings touch the the clouds (that is the reason why people call them sky buildings). The second place is the wooden bridges. These wooden bridges can across forests. The final place is the gardens. The gardens have all of the plants on Earth. These are the greats place that Generic_City have.
Another reason why I want to visit Generic_City is that they have one of the best technologies. One of the best technology they have is robots. In my opinion, robots are difficult to make because it has a lot of bits and pieces to put together. Another best technology they have are air bots. Airbots deliver the food or items to your house. The final new technology is trains. The trains do not touch the ground. The hover over the ground. These are the new technologies the have.
To close, the best place I want to visit is Generic_City because it has a lot of beautiful places to visit and they have a lot of new technology. The first reason why I want to go to Generic_City is because it has beautiful places. The second reason why I want to go is because it has a lot of new technology. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
FA9E315D7939 | Some school dictrict shifted to a four day week and at ten hour for day, not because fo fenancial needs, but other did so to make it earser to schedule soporting event or after-school activities. On my opinion, my school should follow the model by extending the school day two hours. Beacuase they conserver enegy and resources.
The benefist of goint to a four-day week and ten hours day for schooling, is that if offers teacher and students an additional day of rest every week. More rest then equates to dealing with less strees over the courses of a school year. Students feel lees pressure, because they have more time to study at their own place at home, especially in the later grades. For example, I am senior in my school, if my school follow this model I will have more time for work in my homework.
The disadvantages of four-day week and ten hours day. Shifting do this schedule does have centain disadvantages, especially for the working parent. For the parents of yourger student, an aditional full day of daycare nay need be schoduled very weed Instead of a partial day this leads to added costs that some families, living paycheck to paycheck, may not be able to afford.
In conclusion, the school be should the four-day week and extending the school day two hours. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
FA9EEE4BF0AD | In some societies, student are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. Their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward a specific career. They want to make sure you have the classes you need in order to acheive your career . The career that you will be giving to the counsouler will be befetional. After the graduation you will easily take the classes that you wanted.
firstly, I think it is good idea to identify your career before entering to high school. When you submitting your application to the high school, they will look at the classes that you need to graduate. If you plan your career from a young age, you will achieve your career very strong and easily. In order to have a successful life you need a good career. The plan which you Will be thinking , or taking will show a how organize you are.
secondly,Try to talk with someone who have experiences in this types of problems. When you talk to someone they will be giving you some advises to help you during your high school time. For example: When you want to take the classes you need to take , or you have to take, but they give you useless classes you do not need for graduation. If you want to go to a law school, then you need to take social study ,or government but when you do not commit your plan of career they will give some useless classes like Photography, Independent living and Art which you do not need for law school.
Thirdly,It is very important to have a good education in this day and age. You do not need to waste time of your life in classes you do not need. We have to try our best to be organized. You have to think about your future ,and consciousness that will be coming to you. There is multiple ways to began your career, solve problems , and finally acheive your career.
In conclusion, you need to have an idea or a career about what do you want be in future. You need to commit or tell your teacher about what do you need in order to graduate from high school. We need to put effort to acheive something that can make us happy and our family. Try our best to solve any problems we have in a good way or talk to someone. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
FAA0197AFF57 | To be yourself in a universe, that is faithfull examine to make you something else is the excellent achievement.
To be you in a world, it is not the easy part of yourlife. That is why the Author Ralph Emerson mention the best qoute for us to believe in ourseleve and do the great jobs to became a good person. For example the only key that is gonna help you to be success in your timeline is to be yourself to trust your faith. I can see too much people in this earth the people whom is just sitting down, and waiting for a wedding party to eat something free. I mean by saying that is; you have to move, you have to try, and you have to trust yourself that you can do everythings to achieve the greatest accomplishment.
However; to be yourself, it is gonna help you to have a good personality between the people whom is living around you in the earth. For example, if you have a good personality and have a meeting with people like President, voice President, this is also gonna rely your ability surround those people.
Other than that, convince people to be someone in their life. It is also gonna indicate yourself, and your good individuality. For example, if you persuade someone the person who give up in her/his life, and never try to do something for their future. They need to support by someone,by the person who is always saying that " Be yourself and make others too, to be someone." So, it is also gonna consider yourself and get respect from the people to known as the best person in a universe.
Make smart choicess to prove yourself, and try to bright your future. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
FAA9FC1B315B | In my personal opinion when some schools offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing I mostly disagree. Its not because I am attending a public high school. There are reasons why I mostly disagree about this situation.
One of the reasons why I disagree is because this might hurt the students communication skills.
when you have classes online you are not at the school you are home taking this class so you basically don't associate with anyone except your teacher now since i have never took a online class i wouldn't be able to tell if its better to not know no one or to associate with anyone but personally I just dont't thing it's good for students to attend online school if you are someone that like to work with people and not just your teacher. Other students also might be able to understand some stuff that you don't understand and that they should be able to help you. They won't be able to help you if you not there with them.
The second reason why I disagree and I really don't think that online schools is not beneficial is that it hurts your participation skills too. Here in school we do so much activities connected to things we are learning and it helps very much because if you do activities connected to the things we are learning it gets stuck in your mind. Its also better to ask questions and to understand better. There might be some stuff that you didn't understand face to face with your teacher its better to ask them like that and understand like that instead of emailing them or contacting them through different thing.
Also the teacher might not respond as soon as possible and that might be a problem and affect your grade and thats why its better to talk to your teacher face to face and deal with understanding face to face that's my second opinion.
My last and final reason is that you might get lazy and miss classes since you take it at your home . That might affect your grade too which is very risky if you're not a productive and committed person to your education online class is not for you. For example me personally it will not be good for me because I am a very lazy person i am pretty sure I
will miss classes either by sleeping in or some other unexeptalbe reasons . But also there are people that are very organized and careful people out here that can risk this for those kind of people online classes are good and they can take it because thy are committed to Finnish there education in a very careful way.
Those are my good reason why i don't agree with online classes it's a good thing that schools offer distance learning as an option for students if you have a good reason why you don't actually go to the school but personally i dont agree with this situation. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
FAAFFC983E47 | The majority of the students take about four years to graduate and go to the college, but also there are students who decide to finish the high school in tree years or as soon as possible. The question is, why are they trying to finish the high school earlier that the other ones?. A few people decide to finish the high school because they have other kind of goals to accomplish like travel or enlist to the Army etc.
In some situations this people aren't able to take electives courses like, Graphic Design, Culinary arts, Earth space, Mathematics, Health AP or Driving class. Whatever of this ones or others ones they can't enjoy them. In other situations this students take nigh school or summers school or both.
In my personal opinion take nigh school is really tired because when you leave the school yo have about one hour to get ready and go to the other school to take your course.
In other way, there are students who do not have support by their parents to finish the high school, and that is why they decide to finish early to have more time and find a job to support themselves. Even if they have a half time job, is not enough.
Enlist to the Army is a good idea for some people especially for high school students, they have a conversation with their parents to have the aprovation to do three years in the high school and get a career into the Army.
Some guys also want to finish early because they want to go to the college in other country or because they want to travel and have a extravagant life, this are the most common situations of why students decide to graduate during three years, but is better that dropped the school in the last year if they have the normal school ( four years).
I think that this programs that the district offer is good for those who have the potential to do it and finish the high school as soon as possible, and they need to know the probability to do not have or be able to have elective courses or Generic_School. I know about some guy who decided to take this program offered by the schools districts. He told me that is hard because while he was in the school he also studied for the exams of nigh school and he had courses really bored and after that, he took summers school all of this on his freshman year, I think that the only need to be constant interest and keep a good grade to success.
In my opinion take the traditional four year is better because you can enjoy of many things like the clubs in the school, community service or even participate in a sport team in the school like soccer, football, tennis or basketball. this things is what make a school awesome. in the traditional four year, you can pick electives courses that you really like it and do not make you bored. Also in the traditional four year you can talk to you consular to have Generic_School. But when you take the tree years you can not enjoy about you favorite things.
Take the tree year since my point of view is bad but could be great for other ones who has different things to accomplish, I dont have rush to finish early, and that is why I think about the tree years and the traditional schedule for the four years. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
FAB189F7E4DF | Have you ever do something bad in your life , and your friends influence you to do it ? well everybody has two types of friend one with good behavior and the other with bad behavior. But the teenagers of this time never think in consequences when they are following bad examples. So I believe that a good example by your own behavior is the best way to infuence other people because people learn things by examples, or if you get together with somebody who is not a good influence for you believe or not your are going to learn what he does. People is always around you they are always looking what you do and they are criticizing your actions.
My first reason is because good behavior is the best way to influence people because if you are a smart person, educated , and happy your are going to be a example for other people and they might said that they want to be like you. Many teenagers has ruin their life for following bad influences. People can said that we are old enough to know what is good or wrong but we never think from what is coming. The world is full of bad person and some people would ask their self, why there's too many bad people in this world? the answer is because people is influencing others to do bad stuffs. If human wants a better world for their kids they have to be good influences, good examples to the new generation that is coming.
In my own experience I have seen friends and relatives that has ruin their life for getting together with people that is a bad influence for them. Is really sad when you see somebody that is in jail or dead for following bad examples by having bad friends. When you are following a bad example that person never is going to tell you what are the consequences. As you can see babies when they are in the age of learning new things they do what their parents do or what they teach them to do. Adults and teenagers are a little bit different because not all the time we do what people tell us to do, but we always end up learning something of that person.
People is always criticizing so if you don't want to that happen be a good example. Being a good influence people would trust in you, but being the opposite of that nobody would trust in you. And when we realize is too late because the people you appreciate are separating from you for been a bad influence for others or maybe for them. My grandma always said , " what you crop, you would sow." For me those phrases mean a lot because being a good example or having a good behavior will take you to succeed in life , and is not just that there are many ways to succeed in life too.
For these reasons I believe that a good example is the best way to influence others so the people that is learning or looking what you do can learn good things about you and by that wat can trust in you. Also you will feel proud of yourself that your are influencing other in a right way. If you want a better world be a good example for others and don't lose your time in influencing other in a bad way. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
FABE0E966789 | Dear, Principal
Students may bring there phones to school but they could only use them while there in lunch or any free time. Phones need to be turned off while in class or in the library if not they might get there phone taken away and they need to pick it up at the end of the day. Student's phones must be in their backpacks or in their pockets during class.
On, this policy by having phones at school the students should just leave their phones at home so it wont be taken by the teacher or so you wont loose it at school or other students wont have to rob you. So that's why students should really leave there phones at home. Another thing why students should not bring their phones to school at all it might fall and brake when you walk or if your texting you might bump into each other
I believe that students really need to leave there phones at home because someone might call in the middle of class. or a friend might text you in the middle of class also so students leave your cell phones at home.. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
FAC0A72D62EE | Churchill's statement is important to American lives. Currently, people who fail always gets back up to keep on reaching for the goal they want to achieve. However, when people fail, they think they should give up and stop trying. It's important to discuss about these different sides. Churchill's statement is important for not giving up or quitting.
The first reason why we should never give up is that we learn from our mistakes. when you fail at something you have to understand that it's not the end of the world. If you don't get something right or you mess up on it, you'll know to get it right next time. It's always important to recognize that you can reach for you're goals to be successful. when you fight for what you believe in, you'll never go wrong.
The second reason why you should never give up is because you want to reach you're top goals. When you want something, you have to fight for it. People who fail or didn't do something right, they give up and say that they have wasted their time, But in life, we can't always win or do something right. we are bound to fail at some point in our lives and it doesn't feel good. However, we keep on pushing for it because we want to be successful and feel great about ourselves to know that we didn't give up.
On the other side, when people give up, they have fail. People who think they have what it takes to be able to get a job, being able to go to a good school, or pursuit their dreams without mistakes, is someone who's going to give up the moment they've fail. The people who got great jobs or got into a good school, worked hard for it. Even when things went bad, they didn't give up because they work hard for that purpose. Some people who fail, often say that they're not smart or not that good. If your not that smart, how are you here today? When you struggle on something, you have to understand that the people around you are the people that can help you with deal with you're problems. Friends and families are the people who can help you in your time of need.
Finally, whenever you have a goal or something you want to have, it's important to never give up or quit halfway through. A goal is something you want to have and by working hard, you know you'll able to reach it in no time. Whenever you get stuck or something goes wrong, you always have support from the people you know very well to help you. By not giving up on what you're trying to reach, you can be able to feel confident about yourself and be able to be confident through life. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
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Why people should make their own decisions in their lives? We should learn new things. We should make self-improvement. We should have a better future, If we make great decisions in our lifes.
We have to learn new things for example: sports, science, history, art, techonlogy. We should learn a new language. We can learn a new culture with our friends from another country. We can learn a lot of things to make our lives much better. We can be professionals if we make great decisions.
We have to learn how to be independent. We must think like adults. We have to be more responsable like doing our own things by our-self. If we think like that we can make our things well, and we can make our own decisions.
We should have a better future in our lifes. We should have a great job to make a lot of money. We should have a great house to live good. If we don't make something bad and we follow great decisions, We can see what is wrong and what is right.
Our decisions can make us much better in our lives. We have to demonstrate that we can make great decisions by motivating our self every day. We musk seek guidance from other people to learn how to make our decisions. We have to make our things by our-self?
We can show that in this life we can make good decisions by learning new things, by making self-improvement, and by planing a better future. We have to learn a lot of things of this life. If we make the things right we can show the people that nothing is impossible in this life. Is time to make great decisions in this life if we want to grow as a person. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
FAC3F8F91C6F | Graduating early isn't a good idea because lot of people find it difficult in maturing. Some people are lack of plan/organization in their life.
It will be difficult for them to face the challenge the world have.
I do not support it because i feel like the school are rushing to grow up to fast. They will leave you with a huge responsibility that you aren't ready to take on. Is like tell a new baby bird to fly in the world that fill with danger things.
Most people that graduate early goes through depression because they are loosing a huge part of their child hood.
from my point of view people who graduate find a huge difficult in life because when they graduate,they will have that mind set it is good idea to take a year of college because they graduated early and when you rest for a year you start to forget everything you learn and when you go to t college you have less memory on what u learn in high school.
For a student to graduate early they most have a lots of requirement to graduate such a good record responsible and have a plan in life.
Graduating early is a wasted of time and effort. All you got to do is bared the four and be will prepared for the future instead of u jumping into the future with out knowledge | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
FAC8305E209D | When I was working at the Daycare, it was not only me working and taking care of the kids, there was three more ladies doing the same job and working all together. So I think that is more benefit working in group that working alone because it make easily the things.
First, the first thing we do is give the kids breakfast, and while the kids are eating two of the ladies are looking after them, and the others two, are planning the activity that the kids are going to be doing during the day and try to keep them busy. Also all ladies give ideas and at the end we try to put all ideas together and work on it as a team.
While the day is passing, we do everything we need to teach and do the activities, and working all together is easily for us to finish early. when we finish early we always read or dance until the time to go home comes. Also we disgust who was the one that behave was good and we also give stars for the behavior to kids. Sometimes the kid don't behave well and if there were only one person taking care of the kids it most be difficult to do what we all four need to do.
Also, everyone goal is to keep the kids safe,having fun, and also learning who to write, so at the time for them go to school they are going to feel relative and don't be scare of going to a regular school. And when that happen is how we know that we make a work together.
As you see, I feel that is more beneficial working together in a group because, everyone in the group has ideas, is easily to finnish everything fast and also everyone has the same goal. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
FAF2897C9B65 | I agree with Winston Churchill that success consits and failing many times.
One reason is that if you fail, that is going to make stronger for the next time. It's like a game; you are going to do whaterver it takes to gain the game. If you do not do it in the first round, it's going to be the second and you'll do even better. A lots of people think that if they don't do it in the first time, that's going to be it. They don't realize that if they just keep going they're going to get there, and be success. Wouldn't it be great if we didn't have to fail? but that's how it's some times. We have to accept it and keep trying. Life is fool of problems, but we just have hang in there and keep trying and get where we want.
Another reason is that never loss of enthusiasm, that's the most important reason of all of this. if we don't have that exclusive word is like life does not make sense at all. For example, I used to have this friend that his mom wanted him to be a doctor, but he didn't want to be a doctor. He wanted to be a teacher. Farthermore, he study to be a doctor. He wasn't that good but that was what his mom wanted. The second year, which was even harder he just stop. He talked to his mom saying that was not for him. He did not have any enthusiasm on that career, so he fanilly started classes to become a teacher. now, that was for him. He did so much better, good grades and excellents jobs. In short, he never lost the enthusiasm to be a what he wanted.
Some people migth say that you don't have to fail, that you have to be success all the time. They migth say that is not ok to fail. However, that's not true, you can fail it's going to make you strong. you are going to have experience and you're going to do things so much better. If you can't do it in the first then, go for the next, and next until you can finally make it.
In summary, success consist and failing many times. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
FAF6B6E4DFF4 | Thomas Jefferson used wrote,'' Determine never to be idle...It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing.'' It is a moral,people always doing things to achieve their life goals. As a person,we all have something want,it can be easy or impossible to get base on how much you have. In this realistic world,since we are born,we only can choose one lifestyle which is always doing something. This world needs useful person,mutually people always doing things for a more comfortable life. Different people have different life,one thing in common is they all have something must to do. For example,students are working hard on learning new knowledge for a good grade on the tests,employers are working hard for a higher income to feed their families...even the boss is working hard to expand his/her companies. Most people are busy the whole life. I believe if you really want to do something,no matter how hard it is and you are always doing it,you can accomplish your goal and have a ''surprising gift''. Life is fair,whether you are poor or unhealthy,It always take care of hardworking one. On the other hand,what can we do if we determine to be idle? That will be extremely boring. I cannot image if I just sit on the bench a whole day and doing nothing, it is like a waste of time,a waste of life. However,inactivity also serve some purposes;Such as rest. But that's all I can think about. In my point of view,people are like the ants,they work together to make their home better. Basically,people always doing things whether they want or not. This is how the world functioned. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
FB1A86FB4BFC | Do you think is it a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age? Some students commit a career at a young age, but some other students commit a career when they get older. The students that commit to a career at a young age they might want to do it when they're young so they can finish with their career. While the other students wants to do it later. Students who commits a career at a young age they're in a good way, because they're doing it when they're young. They can finish it, and plan on doing other things like being a doctor, engineer, nurse construction, or going to college. Students who are planning on doing it later are going to wait a long time they might not have time to think about what will they be doing in the future. By the time they're done they might be old,so it's better to to do it when you're younger, so you can have so much time to make a decision. Everyone has a different opinion than others, but not everybody has the same opinion. Some people thinks that student that are committing to a career at a young age are better, but other people might think that take their time are better. Students who are committing to a career at a young age are better,because you have so much time to make a decision on what you want to be when you grow up. That is why committing to a career at a young age is better than committing to a career when you're older. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |