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Why would anyone want to have a driverless car that still needs a driver. Wouldn't drivers get bored of just sitting there. What is the whole point of have a driverless car when the driver obvislously still needs to drive it. Then might as well is not have a driverlesss car. Having a driverless car is a very dangerous thing because not only would the car be movineon it's own but the driver would get distracted. either, by his/her phone or thier kids in the back not acting right. The driver would either text and drive. Also, thedriver would take anvantage of it like they could be drinking and driving because they are not controling the car.

So, honestly in my opinon it is not right to have a driverless car because of safety reasons and money situations as in the driver would have to pay because the car was not functioning right. And also texting and driving , drinking etc. Have you ever wandered about self-driving cars? I believe that they should be the next step in the automobile industry. Some reasons why self-driving cars should be part of the future is because of the traffic jam assistance, in car entertainment, and the safety of the self-driving vehicle. How does a car assist you in a traffic jam?

In the self-driving cars vehicle manufactors have built it to be able to drive in conditions below 25mph. When a person is in a traffic jam they begin to get bored and eventually sleepy. Instead of a person now continuisly have to push and release the gas the car now does that for you. Also when the car is driving the person is required to keep their hands on the steering wheel at all times. This feature also alows the car to react if the driver falls asleep. Wouldent in-car entertainment just be another distraction to the driver?

Most people would say that having something else to watch while behind the wheel is a distraction to driving. For this in-car entertainment the feature would only be avalible for the driver when the car is in traffic jam assist mode and would instantly shut off when the driver needs to take over the car. How is all these gagets safe for the driver and all other drivers?

The safety of these self-driving cars has been checked over and over. More and more sensors are being put into the car to make it able to detect other cars and to stop/go when needed. Although one arguement about safety has been brought up about not having a human driver controlling the car at all times.

Have you wandered what a self-driving car would be like? I believe that self driving cars should be the next step for the automobile industry. Some reasons why it should be the future of cars is because of traffic jam assistance, in car entertainment, and the safety of the self-driving cars. What would it be like to have a self-driving car? You are walking through all the different houses. There are so many to pick, and you have to choose the right one for the right price. This house looks aesthetic, but this one's cheaper. This one has a bigger backyard, but this one is in a better community. There are too many ways where you could go wrong. You end up calling up your friends to help you look through the options. You've all been there before, whether it was making decisions as big as buying the right house or as small as what restaurant to eat at. In order to get the good advice you need, you should ask more than one person. By asking multiple people, you will have more options on what to do, different views and opinions on the situation, and less stress about the decision.

One reason you should talk to more than one person is to get many options as for what do. While one solution may not work very well, another may be the best one for you. Asking more people also increases the chances of finding someone who had to make the same decision or was in the same situation. This would be incredibly helpful because they could give advice on what they chose to do and the result. For example, when I was working on a difficult math problem, I asked many people for their ideas on how to approach it. Though some of them could not solve the problem or help me, others came up with brilliant solutions. One of them had seen a similar problem before, so he pointed me in the right direction. By asking more than one person for advice, I received many choices from which I could pick the best one. However, sometimes choices are not enough, and we need to understand the options better.

Everyone can view an issue differently depending on personal experience or background knowledge. By asking more than one person for their input, you can understand the whole decision better. Understanding the positives and negatives of each side would greatly assist us with making a better choice. I applied this in real life by asking my friends for help when I was trying to decide on what to spend my money on. They explained to me the reasons they would buy or not buy each item. Because of them, I responsibly used my money on something that would benefit my studies and was worth the price I paid for. By weighing the pros and cons of each option, you can more easily make the best decisions for you. Asking many different people for their opinion will help you understand the full picture. However, sometimes these decisions can be extremely overwhelming.

Decisions can be very stressful because of all the options. However, when others also understand your situation, it is a lot less of a weight to carry. Talking to more than one person can help relieve the stress a lot more than if it is carried by only one or two people. For instance, I was very stressed about an upcoming competition and I could not focus on studying. I explained my situation to many of my friends and they helped me calm down and gave me advice on how to focus and study. Getting advice from many people helped me relieve my stress and do well at the competition. I felt more calm because of the support from my friends after getting advice. Making sure you are not stressed is very important because it could affect your studies and relationship with friends and family. By asking more than one person for advice, you will most likely be less stressed.

Listening to multiple options, knowing the pros and cons of each side, and relieving decision-making stress are all reasons why you should ask more than one person for advice. You always want to make the right choice, especially for bigger decisions like buying a house. Getting to know all your options and the pros and cons of each is very important for making the best choice for you. However, this could be very stressful and asking all your friends for advice will make sure you feel supported and less stressed. Next time you have to make a decision, don't forget to ask more than one person for advice! Extracurricular activities have been a controversial topic of discussion for decades. Parents, teachers, students, and principals have felt the need to express their opinion on the implementation of extracurricular activities. I attend Generic_School, a place where students have many extracurricular activities to choose from, all of which take place after the school day is over. Some choose to attend and others choose to abstain. I partake in them occasionally, but I tend to go home once the final bell rings. That was before my principal decided that all

Generic_School students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity, whether it be sports, yearbook design, student council, or something else. This decree has denied the freedom of choice to not only me, but hundreds of other students at my school with regards to extracurricular activities. I strongly disagree with the decision of my principal on this matter because forcing students to participate in extracurricular activities exhausts students and tremendously decreases the time that a student has to complete schoolwork assigned to them.

Generic_School students should not have to regularly participate in extracurricular activities because rather than giving students time to relax, it depletes their energy. Generic_School students are tired as it is. To understand how fatigued they are, allow me to use an example of someone who is exhausted without the addition of extracurricular activities to their schedule: me. I wake up at 5:50, board my school bus at 6:30, attend school from 7:30 to 2:15, get home at 3:00, and do homework for four hours before eating dinner and going to sleep. Add three hours to the mix and I am going to bed at 11:00, giving me only six hours to sleep. Not seven, not eight, not nine, and certainly not ten. Following a routine where there is only time for six hours of sleep decreases concentration, slows thinking, damages memory, and can even stunt growth during puberty. Generic_School students cannot simply adapt to the new conditions. No middle school student can. That is why Generic_School students should not have to chronically attend extracurricular activities because it hurts students more than it helps them.

Generic_School students should not have to consistently partake in extracurricular activities because rather than giving students a sacred time and place to complete schoolwork, it massively decreases work and study time. At Generic_School Middle School, there is a particular extracurricular activity called "Generic_Name's Work Zone" or "WWZ." WWZ is a place where students are able to sit down and complete schoolwork. Those that attend for the sole purpose of doing work choose to do so at Generic_Name's Work Zone rather than at home because WWZ is a silent work area, which should aid concentration. The problem is that most Generic_School students who attend do not come there to do work or to study but to instead play games which can distract those who are trying to work. Trust me, I know from experience. I could not do more than 30 minutes of work before being sucked into my cell phone. WWZ lasts for an hour, only half of which I used for work. That is why I stopped going. However, I do not have that option anymore now that I must participate in at least one extracurricular activity and somehow make time to work without being distracted, however difficult it may be. That is why Generic_School students should not have to routinely attend extracurricular activities because it takes work and study time away from them.

I strongly disagree with the decision of my principal because forcing Generic_School students to participate in extracurricular activities wears them out and decreases the time that a Generic_School student has to finish assigned work. First of all, extracurricular activities melt a student's energy and can negatively impact a student's health and well-being. Second, extracurricular activities lead to students being distracted, ultimately depleting work and study time. Extracurricular activities were supposed to be a way to help students complete work, come to school happier, and get better grades. However, force-feeding extracurricular activities to Generic_School students will not produce the desired effect that my principal hopes it will, and that is a fact.Ding, ding, ding. Thats the sound of a school bell at the end of the day. Over 500 kids rushing to their bus, but not one of them is staying after school. It's not that schools don't have after school it's that students just don't care or they don't know what's out there. In all my years of going to school I have all ways participated in after school activities, and every single one of them has helped me in some way, and that's why I think that students should participate in them. Students should be required to participate in sports, working on year book, or serving on student council because it helps them maintain grades, gives students a chance to interact with other students, and they have a chance to give back to their school.

Students that play sports have to maintain their grades when they'er off the field in order to play on the field. This helps them to have a "C" or higher and they can apply what they learn on the field to when they'er off the field. A student in my class is always asking for his absent work because he has to leave early for one of his games. This student doesn't play just one sport but 3. So when he comes back the next day he has to make up all of his work if he wants to stay on the team. An example of applying what student learn on the field to off the field is my friend that plays football. He said to me "I could never make a touch down if some one wasn't covering my blind side",then he said, "It's not about if

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win because

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would have never maid it if there was no one on the team to cover me." Then the next day at his game he maid sure that the crowds were celebrating him and the team when they won.

Year book gives students a chance to interact with other students by giving new students a chance to make friends, and it helps them find other students they can relate to. In the 6th grade I was going to a new school, that I new nothing about and then club sign ups came, and I decided to sign up for year book. when I started out they gave me a camera and told me what kind of pictures they were looking for. When I went around the school and asked students if I could take their picture they were nice about it and said sure. Out of the 25 people I asked to take their picture 17 of them asked me if I wanted to be friends, and I said yes. Also the people in the year book club were new to the school just like me we talked about how we came to a new school and none of are friends came with us. Year book helped me find friends and find people who understood what I was going trough.

Student council is a good way to give back to your school, by showing that they appreciate your school and to show school spirit. Students on student council show that they appreciate their school when they represent them. For example when student council does a sock drive and then goes and distributes the socks to the less fortunate, they are showing how their school feels, and that they want to give back to the community we live in. When the students on student council show school spirit they go to the school sports games, show up for fund raisers, and set an example for how other students should act in school. By showing this appreciation and spirit they set the bar higher for other schools and show that they support our's.

Students should participate in sports, working on year book, or serving on student council because they will have good grades, a chance to interact with other students, and a way to give back to the community. Students will build character buy interacting with other students and have fun while doing it. Ding, ding, ding, thats the sound of the bell for after school. All the students flood into the hallways talking to each other about sports, year book, and student council. No student fells left out and every student has a friend.Summer assignments are world renowned for their boring nature, however their purpose is to maintain knowledge over long-term breaks.

While students slave away over AP or DE assignments over summer, they feel as if they are wasting time on a topic that will not be discussed in class or will not be relevant to the class.

Most teachers see summer assignments as a way for students to jump straight into doing work when the school year starts.

This summer assignment system should be changed so it is student driven, allowing for students to choose topics based on interests or future career paths to make sure that students gain independence and a chance to inform themselves on important current events to become a more efficient member of society.

A student-driven assignment can give the pupil a chance to find an interest.

This interest could be; the environment, Biology, Chemistry, Medicine, or any other topic that may spark the interest of the student to make that into a future career path.

The introduction of student-driven learning can increase productivity in the student, because student-driven learning is not based on being forced to research, but the student's values the ideas or topic that they are researching.

An issue with student's choosing their assignment is that the topic could be unrelated or has no basis for education and will not teach the student adequate information, however with regulations from school boards and teachers it can be avoided.

The problem with teacher-based or a curriculum-style learning is that the student may feel overwhelmed by the speed of the course of the assignment and simply not do it, while the student-paced learning allows for mistakes to be made in order for growth over long breaks.

During the school year, students face challenges such as tests, quizzes, and a monumental load of homework.

In the summer months, it allows for students to experience independence at the cost of having to do work or assignments over the course of their break.

In the perspective of the student, the teacher-designed work creates a sense of loss of individuality, where students believe that cannot make choices on their own.

The introduction of student-designed work over the summer will give students to option to keep independence while still maintaining their level of knowledge.

If student-designed projects were to be integrated, it would provide a more real world view for students to learn from.

Students would be able to gain knowledge on real world issues or adult life.

This introduction of real world knowledge to the youth can provide for them later in life by making an easier transition from young-adult to fully-independent and working adult.

However, many students may not take advantage of this ideology, by not looking into topics of interest or topics that can pertain to future life, but those few will be out shadowed by the success of those who learn about what they care about.

If students are more informed on current events, it can provide a new group of people who can contribute to societies many problems such as the environmental crisis or climate change.

For example, Greta Thurnberg was provided ed much time to learn about climate change and the earth's environmental crisis because of her homeschooling, now she is fighting for a movement that can save our planet, while still being a child.

In conclusion, summer assignments should be student-driven and designed to ensure that students maintain independence by being able to choose their paths in life based on interests as well as an opportunity for the youth to become informed on current events to contribute to society.

Many students may not take advantage of this opportunity, however the growth of independent-minded children can increase the growth of society as a whole.  Do you ask people for advice? Asking different people for advice can help you see from multiple points of views, some times we talk to more than one person. having different opinions can help yourself make a better choice than an horrible choice.

I think everybody should ask for advice and give advice. A lot of people should be nice enough to give advice and those people reciving the advice should listen very carefully to them, getting advice could be helpful. If your a kid reciving advice from an grown up you should most definitly listen because an adult know more than what we know so ya´ll should listen carefully.

Having multipl opinions is good because if one doesn´t go as plan than you can have several to fall back on instead of having just one when you can having several more to follow to. Everybody is going to need advice at some in time maybe not now but later you are going to need it. Taking advice will not be as easy as it seems, some times it may be easy other times it may be hard taking it in.

Asking different people for advice can help you see from multiple points of views, Everybody should ask for advice. Having multiple opinions is a good thing. Ask for advice every time you need it, that´s why people are here to help you they just wanna know your problem or what´s happened in your life, if you need help passing a class, getting up for work and you have no car, people can help you,

advice can help you se more clearly of your situation to get out of it so just ask them for advice anytime you need it.I think government should change electoral voting to voting by popular vote. Americas government say every citizens vote counts but they are really only counting the electoral votes. Their was an incident in 2000 called "The disaster factor" according to source 2, this crisis let electors defy the will of the people. Some electors called "faithless electors" refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for who ever they want.

If we have electoral votes we might as well not have popular votes. People spend there time going to vote for the president they feel is better for this country yet, when they get home and watch the polls they realize the only votes they are counting are electoral. Growing up i was taught that every vote counts be voting just to vote for electorals just so they can vote for our president doesn't seem like im voting for myself it seem like they are voting for us.

In source 3 their counter-claim is that we should keep our electoral colleges, they also say "it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors." basically telling on themselves by saying our votes don't matter or count.

In source 2 they say "the electorsl colleg is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they have no chance of winning" the electoral college isn't fair at all, if it was based off popular votes, candidates will have what it takes to win in any state they want.

In conclusion, in my opinion government should remove the electoral college, It is not a fair system to U.S. citizens every citizens vote should count so it should be abolished. Decisions, Decisions